Procure Little Girl Lost (Fast Fiction) Designed By Debra Webb Displayed In Manuscript

short story I'd like to see lengthened amp fleshed out more make it richer and the characters more wellrounded And better edited.
It's a waste of time to keep reiterating details over and over again, Yes, we know the little girl's been missing foryears and that Paul has given up and believes she's gone and that Jenna won't give up searching get on with the story already! Gah! I almost gave up because so little was happening.

It did have an intriguing plot, though, Jenna has tracked her daughter I'd like to have known more about how to a secret facility experimenting on kidnapped kids.
I'm not into conspiracy theories, but it was a good angle, I think this could become a fullfledged thriller with a little more work, Light on the romance, which I really liked, Fast Fiction Suspense short stories full of intrigue

Jenna Thompson is living every mother's nightmareseven years ago,

her daughter was kidnapped.
But Jenna knows her child is still alive, even though her husband begs her to move on to save their marriage.
When Jenna receives a tip off, she is filled with hope, For the chance to hold her daughter again, she'll risk her marriage, her reputation and her life, DEBRA WEBB is the USA Today bestselling author of thannovels, including reader favorites the Shades of Death, the Faces of Evil and the Colby Agency series.
She is the recipient of the prestigious Romantic Times Career Achievement Award for Romantic Suspense as well as numerous ers Choice Awards.
InDebra was honored as the first recipient of the esteemed L, A. Banks Warrior Woman Award for her courage, strength, and grace in the face of adversity, Recently Debra was awarded the distinguished Centennial Award for having achieved publication of herth novel, With than four million books in print in numerous languages and countries, Debras love of storytelling goes back to her childhood when her mother bought her DEBRA WEBB is the USA Today bestselling author of thannovels, including reader favorites the Shades of Death, the Faces of Evil and the Colby Agency series.
She is the recipient of the prestigious Romantic Times Career Achievement Award for Romantic Suspense as well as numerous ers Choice Awards.
InDebra was honored as the first recipient of the esteemed L, A. Banks Warrior Woman Award for her courage, strength, and grace in the face of adversity, Recently Debra was awarded the distinguished Centennial Award for having achieved publication of herth novel, With than four million books in print in numerous languages and countries, Debras love of storytelling goes back to her childhood when her mother bought her an old typewriter in a tag sale.
Born in Alabama, Debra grew up on a farm, She spent every available hour exploring the world around her and creating her stories, She wrote her first story at age nine and her first romance at thirteen, It wasnt until she spent three years working for the Commanding General of the US Army in Berlin behind the Iron Curtain and a five year stint in NASAs Shuttle Program that she realized her true calling.
A collision course between suspense and romance was set, Since then she has expanded her work into some of the darkest places the human psyche dares to go, Visit Debra at sitelink www, debrawebb. com. sitelink.