Gather Matters Of State (Space Portal Vector, #2) Crafted By A. Phallus Si Readable In Version
This was freaking awesome!
Youve got space, aliens, claiming fabulously wrapped up in some serious UST until it culminates into all sorts of hotdirtywonderful, The cherry on top is the growly possession made that much better with a good sprinkling of jealousy and protectiveness, UNF!
Apparently this just pushed all my buttons, Why the hell is this onlypages Wheres the rest of Damien and Haydens adventure How the heck do I get more Dammit!! I seriously would kill to see their courtship and official bonding! grumbles
Fuckstars, commets, collisons and solar flares! This was fun times! “I didnt traverse,kiloparsecs in the last six cycles, achieve the rank of Kapit, and smuggle Boson lasers for your father just to fuck you.
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I'm bursting with pride that I'm friends with this author, I loved this it hit my favorite tropes for age gap, surreptitious claiming, exhibitionism, "mine", dirty talk, and has a plot, I found the entire setup completely believable and the world building was great: I imagine McCaffrey's FSP ships docking at SPV before they head out into the galaxy, I wanna party at Stripes, the Thylacine nightclub!
V, did you put the tentacles in there just for me squee He inked on the floor! SO hot.
The whole story is just so affectionate towards the sci fi amp space opera genres, that I had one giant grin plastered onto my face the whole time.
Bonus points for referencing wraiths, younglings, D'Spyro, mers, klah, Teen Titans!, FUCKSTARS, and a whole parsec full of other stuff I can't even remember now, But it all gave me happyfeelz, and I definitely need to reread,
Plus Bree Archers's pretty cover is gorgeous! Stars
A saucy scifi romance romp, Me likey!
This story had a lot working for it, To begin with, the prompt is so fricken delicious, I found myself in a frozen state of appreciation for far longer than was appropriate, Once I tore my eyes away and finally got into the story, I was swiftly drawn into the remarkably imagined scifi world which the author so effortlessly created, The writing style was smooth the worldbuilding was impressive the two lead characters were likeable and beguiling and the sex scenes were smokin hot!
The
whole mating bond aspect was fresh and intriguing.
Plus, romantic as all getout,
I wandered every port, starbase, and planet hoping to find the one who would bring balance to me, my complement, From that first moment, I knew that I could stop searching, I had found the one thing I truly wanted, desired above all else you,
I call for a sequel!
An amazing sciencefiction story with some fantastic world building,
Damien is the son of the Captain who is in command of space station by a worm whole, the last stop on the way through a Void.
When he first sees Captain Hayden Ferrier of the Rebellion on histh birthday, he is mesmerized by the handsome man, Throughout the next cycles, he receives more and more contact with the enigmatic man, Little does he know what a Caurentian courtship is like, The sex scenes between the two of them are hot and passionate,
It's not all about their relationship, either, There is some great world building here, I am a sucker for a good sciencefiction story, and this is a good one, There is an interesting plot involving an unknown species, The reader is left in the middle of that and in the middle of their developing relationship which hopefully means there will be more stories in this 'verse,
I know that I will be anxiously awaiting more, Please let there be more to this story! I really, really need a sequel! For such a short story this was just great! I love scifi not to mention agegap, dirty talk, exhibitionism and possessiveness.
The worldbuilding is amazing for such a short story but the plot gives too many loose ends, I have more questions than answers after I've finished this, Please give me anotherpages with those characters, Every now and then you find a book offered for free and find a gem! This story was a treat indeed, I'm not normally a fan of scifi but the author made this story work, for me, Not that she wrote it 'for me' personally, . . okay you get the picture :
Well done, indeed! Matters of State is an entertaining, sexy space opera with fairly extensive world building for such a short story.
Some of the politics went right over my head, and I wanted more kinky action once Damien and Hayden got together, but I enjoyed the talk of bonding and mating.
Thumbs up for Hayden's possessive growling and delicious dirty talk, both of which were mantie melting! I loved both MC's: Captain Hayden Ferrier with his possessive growling and dirty talk and Damien Altamura with his need to be dominated while not being a milquetoast pushover.
Though there was some fairly extensive world building, I found myself lost quite a number of times in trying to figure out some of the terms, etc.
A glossary would have come in handy for example Tcycles versus Tunits, . . is that like minutes, hours, or days,
I would have liked more information about what happened with Brixton and his bondmate and more about the finalization of Hayden and Damien's mating would have been nice.
A creative intergalactic/interspecies romp, with echos from last year's DRitC entry sitelinkStrange Charm, If you like the possessive daddyesque trope, you will find this yummy, It's filled with good humor:
“He was assisting in docking assignments for the gala when he became intrigued by your dimensions, ”
There are also plenty of nuggets planted for more follow stories in this verse,
Reader tip load it up in your ereader so you can get the quick access to dictionary/wikipedia definitions, The author has some mad linguistic skills,
PS Wheelbarrow Races, . . By chance did Jax and Igor watch Damien and unidentified partner compete
Hmm,
This story was fun for me at first, like an extra sexy M/M sci fi Harlequin novel space opera mashup featuring the usual Harlequin inspired ultra possessive and growly male.
However, when the Hetaerae another species showed up it started to become a bit disjointed to me, like there were whole chapters missing between the action that was shown.
Because of this, some things were downright perplexing, but I would love to read a longer, more fleshed out version of this story, Now that would be fun,
The other thing that slightly bothered me were the grammatical errors, which took form in some missing words, But hey, it was free and the mistakes were few so it didn't irk me like it usually would, Oh, and some of the language used by the ultra growly one was a bit over the top, but I'm guessing that was the point,
So, yeahhhh I think this story should totally be made into a book because I NEEDS to know more, What say you, kind author The writing and world building are excellent, The story is well built, we get to learn more and more about the world while we progress,
What I learned is maybe I shouldn't choose to read about alien cultures, even if they're in space, The Earth so called Western culture may be enough for me to deal with,
It was very imaginative, And I would recommend it to readers who enjoy scifierotica involving different alien cultures and species, Hot space sex ftw!
Coming in public,
Talk of spankings,
It was just, . . hot.
Deliciously so. Thank you A. Phallus Si. This was a really fun story with some very likable characters and awesome world building, I loved how ready Damien was to jump into everything and experience life to the fullest, Hayden was also a wonderful toppy character, and pretty sneaky with his wooing of Damien! Very enjoyable read that had me grinning throughout, .