Coming Home by Jay Northcote


Coming Home
Title : Coming Home
Author :
Rating :
ISBN : -
Format Type : Kindle Edition
Number of Pages : 37
Publication : First published November 26, 2013

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Coming Home

Jago returns to his home in the wilds of Cornwall, and is looking forward to catching up with old friends after a term away at university. When he’s reunited with Will—his best mate from sixth-form college and last summer’s fling—Jago’s feelings for him are rekindled and impossible to ignore.

Over the short winter break, Jago can't resist taking whatever Will’s offering. But will the New Year bring new beginnings? Or will Jago be left with more bittersweet memories and a heart that needs to heal again?


Coming Home Reviews


  • Exina

    2 stars

    Non-communication, how I hate you!

    Jago and Will are best friends from sixth grade, and last summer they have become even more than that, though it was never defined. Will broke up because they went to different universities, but Jago hasn’t really got over him.

    Now Jago is home for the holidays, and they pick up where it was left off, but they don’t talk about it.



    There was no other conflict but the lack of communication. Jago and Will were cute and hot together, but I expected more.

  • ☆ Todd


    Cute.




    Sweet.




    Short.



    Light.


    Mildly-angsty.




    Flirty.




    Free.




    3.5 Stars.


    As you were... : )

  • ~✡~Dαni(ela) ♥ ♂♂ love & semi-colons~✡~

    ~4.5~

    I loved this sweet story about two best friends, who became lovers the summer before uni, reconnecting over the winter holidays.

    I could easily have read a hundred pages more about Will and Jago.



    Even though this was a short story, the setting and characters, including Jago's family and Will and Jago's mates, were well developed.

    There was a nice bit of tension, some sexy groping, a failed pirate costume, and the perfect beginning to a new year.

    The ending left a big grin on my face. These British college boys will warm you right up any time of year.

    This story is available for free download, so there's absolutely no reason not to read it.

  • * A Reader Obsessed *

    3.5 Stars

    A Northcote oldie!

    Longtime besties Jago and Will had a summer fling but went their separate ways when they started at different uni’s.

    Both return home for the holidays, and Jago wonders if Will has missed him as much as he has missed Will.

    Classic Northcote that‘s easy breezy with a little sexy. A feel good holiday friends to lovers story!

  • Sheziss

    Cute.



    A boy comes back from uni to celebrate Christmas at home. There he meets the boy he spent the summer with, and nostalgia awakens a story that he didn't want to end.



    Very sweet and feel-good.

    *****

    You can read the book for free
    here

  • Meags

    3 Stars

    As with most of my experiences with second chance romances, I always feel deprived of all the backstory, character development and first times.

    In this particular case, I didn’t really feel the chemistry between the long pining MCs, so I felt a serious disconnect to my engagement with their rekindled romance.

    Still, being a Northcote story, the writing is smooth and effortless, with a very (welcomed) British vibe.

    At a mere 37 pages, I can’t expect too much, but this was certainly an easy way to pass 30 minutes.

  • Sheri

    Now this,

    this is what I'm talking about!

    This was a fabulous shortie and Jay lured me right in.
    I'm a sucka for Brit boys and well done second chances...this pleasantly delivered both.
    Loved the boys, loved the writing, loved the smexy.
    ohh, and the price? Can't beat it, so just read it!

    *4 home-is-where-your-heart-is stars*

  • Macky

    Aww this was lovely and it was free!

    Will and Jago have a holiday romance but Will breaks it off when they both move on to Uni in different cities. Jago still has feelings for the guy so when he comes home for a break and finds Will is there too, he's unsure as to how things will be when they're together again but he's happy to take anything he can from him. Its New year so will it mean new beginnings or is this just going to turn out to be another short fling?

    A freebie well worth picking up for that moment when you need something short , sweet and satisfying. I like Jays writing style very much. No money involved... Go read!! :)

  • TL

    Jago’s bedroom looked so much bigger than he remembered.

    He dumped his rucksack on the floor and stood, circling slowly around as he took it in. It was all familiar; nothing had changed while he’d been away, yet it felt so strange being back after three months at Uni. The large space with its sloping, beamed ceiling was so different from the cramped, modern cube of his tiny student room back in Plymouth.

    Jago grinned. It was good to be home.

  • MaDoReader

    Se lee en un suspiro. No ha estado mal.
    Vuelta a casa de la uni y reecuentro con tu ex del verano... Son una monada estos jovenzuelos :)

  • Mirjana **DTR - Down to Read**


    ***3 Stars***

    Short and sweet.

  • Elsa Bravante

    Una historia muy cortita, para un viaje en autobús. Agradable.

  • ☾ Dαɴιyα ☽


    3.5 stars.


    "When Jago felt Will's arms around him again it felt like coming home."

    It's no secret I'm a sucker for second-chance romances. All that angst that usually accompanies it... ah, what can I say, I just love it... Coming Home wasn't all that angsty -- it was more on the cute side -- but it definitely was the second time the main characters were giving their relationship a chance. This time for real.

    Jago and Will were best friends from sixth-form college (whatever that means), and it was a friendship that turned into something more. Unfortunately, the summer they became more than friends was the summer before they started uni in different towns. So they made a clean break, even though Jago's heart was against that decision, and when he came back home from uni for the holidays, he was reminded just where his heart belongs, and, luckily, this time both Jago and Will are more open about their feelings...

    This was such a sweet story. I wouldn't change it one bit. I do hope they make it.

  • Heller

    Sweet freebie about two friends who hooked up during the summer and broke things off when they went to university. They meet again during the Christmas holidays and sort out their situation. :D

    The story is from Jago's POV. He's been pining for Will but pride stood in the way when Will broke things off. He didn't want to be the one to put his emotions on the line if Will didn't think a long distance relationship would work.

    This is just a nice, cute little read. I liked it.

  • Ariana  (mostly offline)

    What a cute story! Despite its brevity I really rooted for Jago and Will. Jago is coming home in every sense of the word - not only to the place where he lives, to his parents and friends, but to the man he's fallen in love with.
    Some sweet pining and fireworks! What a shame there wasn't more!

  • Marlobo ♥ epilogues

    4.5 stars

    Cute and sweet story amazingly told, I could empathize perfectly with the feelings and physical sensations of every moment.

  • ~Mindy Lynn~

    free 10-23-15

  • Andrea

    Really sweet (only much too short) second chance story about two best friends who had a summer fling and ended things before they went off to University, only to reunite over the holidays.

  • Mandy*reads obsessively*

    I read
    Nothing Serious by
    Jay Northcote and liked it a lot, so when I saw this cute little freebie I decided to read it.
    This is a short story picking up at the Christmas holiday break when Will and Jago see each other again after having a summer affair and deciding to go their own way when they went back to their separate schools in the fall.
    Now it's told completely from Jago's POV and he wasn't all that keen on going their separate ways, but Will has been his friend forever and well better to have him as a friend than lose him altogether.
    Now they have a few weeks before they head off to school again....how's it going to end this time?
    Well, you will just have to read it and see! :D

  • Lisa

    Short and sweet story. A little glimpse into the world of Jago and Will....please Jay, when can we have another snippet??? *sigh*

  • Cas

    Today’s Life Lesson: Just because the book is free and 35 pages and you’re bored (despite having a Kindle that easily has 200+ books existing on it?) doesn’t mean we should waste time on it because we’re stupid and stubborn and prideful and apparently hellbent on showing people that mama really did raise a dumbass!

    But let’s be honest. Will that stop me in the future? Nope. Do I have a handful of regrets right now? Oh boy do I and only like three of them are a direct result of reading this book but that’s for next week’s therapy session. It’s naptime now, mi amigos.

    So basically, this story doesn’t really have much to it except an underdeveloped friends-to-lovers trope that happened before the book even started and is only briefly explored, more so talked about than anything, requited pining for like five pages, and erotica. It’s hollow. Extremely unsatisfying. I don’t know why I bothered thinking there would be anything of substance to 35 pages so I take the blame here, but also why.

    This cup of tea is bitter and cold and not mine at all so I’m gonna dump it out in the sink unless someone else wants it because you know, different strokes for different folks and such, but *muffled into my coffee cup* yikes.

  • Lauren

    This was adorable and just what I needed to cheer me up. It's a very quick read, yet it still managed to make my heart flutter. It's just such a lovely holiday story. I only wish we could have seen more of these two. I'd pay good money for a longer story. Will and Jago are only 18, and I'd have loved to follow their story for the next few years, to see their relationship grow into something deeper and for them to get a lovely happy ending.

    Really, you can't go wrong with this. Short, sweet and FREE! What's not to love?!

  • Candice

    read on 12-5-13

    This was sweet. I liked how uncertain Jago was during his and Will's time together. He just went with the flow, but was freaking out on the inside. Will...I am not so sure about him. I don't know if I see him sticking around for the long haul, but I could be wrong. Maybe I think that because they are so young? I mean, they are what??? 18?

    Overall, cute little story.

  • Heather C

    Cute little holiday story about 2 young lovers reuniting over Christmas break. I would have loved to have seen Jago and Will falling for each other "last summer", but this is about them making a commitment after breaking things off to attend separate colleges.

    Anyway, it was sweet and free and well worth the read.

  • Jesslan Rose

    Coming Home
    By Jay Northcote

    I adored Jago. It took a little bit to fall for Will. The way he hurt Jago and kept continuing to do so in the beginning made it sad. Overall it was sweet and short with some angst. My only complaint was that it was to short. It would've made a wonderful full length story.

  • Jay Northcote

    Please note this isn't a new book from me - it's a 2nd edition with a new cover for one of my free reads. There is no new or additional content.
    This short story is perma-free at Amazon, ARe, Smashwords, Apple and Barnes & Noble :)

  • Anke

    Nice one:) Jago's insecurity and uncertainty was very compelling to follow along until in the end he got his happy ending.

  • Jewel

    Short and absolutely sweet. And, most definitely British. :)

  • Aeren

    Esta sí es una forma mona y romántica de escribir acerca de dos chicos que se reencuentran. 3.5.

  • Shannon


    Perfectly sweet second chance romance between best friends! I love feeling that chest-clenching anticipation right along with the characters- does he feel the same way, does he want the same things?!? Such a great, feel-good little story!