was a magical, hardcore sexual romp with a merman that was mesmerizing to breath, The description of him took my breath away, Tallia knows how to paint a scene, and so far each book I've read from her has gotten by both horny and wonder struck, Great fantasy erotica! This book takes fantasy sex to a whole new level
Wow, this story starts off with a hot scene of rough sex and keeps building from there.
Adeline is quite literally swept away to the hottest and wettest adventure a horny girl could imagine, After reading Ravejoys Griffin Prince and Stag King books I knew I would like this one, and boy did I like it, It is by far my favorite of the three, which surprised me because Ive never fantasized about a merman before! The description of Eris the merman were incredibly detailed and nothing like Id ever imagined before.
I really enjoyed the way the author used the ocean to accentuate the sexiness, I will anxiously be waiting for more books by Ravejoy, Monster porn and basically PWP
it's fun but it's not here to be a profound read if that's what you're looking for
I love books like these at times cause they make me laugh so take from this what you want It's hard to find good merman erotica, it's such a specific taste, but this qualifies.
A short hot tale. Fishy Very Fishy Stars!
Tallia Ravejoy has done it again, . . And I can't help but find this author intriguing,
Just when you think you've read it all, seen it all, . . In comes Mrs. Tallia
To surprise me, confuse me and leave me in awe,
This story is very different from the previous one I've read sitelinkRidden by the Griffin Prince, In comparison sitelinkHooked by the Merman has additional ingredients like:
Light romance,
Destined mateslovers
Consensual sex
Which I didn't expect,
It was very sweet and different from my first Tallia Ravejoy read, It flowed nicely and had an excellent pace, I liked that our male MC was a different sort of merman, A really fishy humanoid, setting aside the weird penis, the author has no issue in introducing male protagonists who are far away from being human, She really grasps the idea of conveying something that's not human but is sentient, And I appreciate that. No, I actually love that!
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Another thing to point out, though her stories are short, they definitely leave an impression, They never fail to make an impact, She's one of those authors that people will either love or hate,
I like her style, although it's offputting sometimes, . .
Her erotica is quite unique, And what intrigues me is that its always in between hot and ridiculously funny, I'm not quite sure if she does it on purpose or not, It's like their's always that raw wtf ingredient that either leaves you speechless or makes you laugh so hard you can't believe that you actually read that scene,
And I'm not sure I'll ever know, . .
It's like if Susan Trombley and Poppy Rhys had a child, . . Tallia would be it. lol!
Do I recommend this book
Yeah, . . For some.
I enjoyed it. I laughed. And I don't regret it, Taking a much needed vacation, Adeline goes on a cruise, Hoping to satisfy a mysterious longing that's plagued her since childhood, she explores her sexuality on the deck of the ship during a storm, Yet hidden in the dark, tossing waves, is a being more beautiful, and sexual, than anything she could have ever dreamed, and he has his heart set on taking her to his world.
WARNING
THIS SHORT STORY HAS HARDCORE SCENES OF GRAPHIC FANTASY SEX, FOR ADULTS ONLY.
Other books by Tallia Ravejoy:
RIDDEN BY THE GRIFFIN PRINCE
HUNTED BY THE STAG KING Why am I putting myself through another Ravejoy story, you ask Because they're a funny alternative to watching a train wreck.
Here are some unintentionally hilarious quotes:
"I pushed my ass against his crotch and rubbed on him like a snake slithering up a tree, claiming him as my dance partner.
" No time to introduce the protagonist's name, get outta the way cuz she hnry!
"His fingers were a blur now, slapping deep into my vagina and whipping my clit with his thumbs.
" Is this human model a metal guitarist All I can picture is a rocker absolutely shredding her clit to the tune of Through the Fire and Flames by DragonForce,
We eventually learn that the protagonist is named Adeline, and she leads Jordan to the deck of the ship to get fucked, We also learn that Jordan likes to roleplay knock knock jokes, "Jordan placed a hand behind my head, then gave it three hard knocks with his other, Like hammering a nail into a board, his dick forced its entire length into me, " Who's there Just this schlong ramming into Adeline's throat, Idk what the punch line is, but it's still probably his dick,
"The cock slid through me like an eel, filling me with each thrust, My pointy nipples tingled from the sea's growl, as if it was the ocean's cock inside me, churning my clit into a whirlpool of pleasure, " There is so much to unpack here, The nautical theme is, I guess, understandable if not hilarious, . . but Ravejoy, I beg you, take a sex ed class, The clit is not inside the vagina, Look a little closer at all the porn you're watching and maybe you'll see an actor helpfully pointing out the clit,
A confusing storm later, human dude exits stage left and the merman finally swims into the spotlight,
Adeline doesn't just fall into instalove, her pussy is instafire, But all we know is that merdude carries a pearly trident and wears a cowl, That's IT.
Literal "fade to black" and we cut to her waking up in Merdude's ship, She escapes, runs into the forest where she stumbles on literal sex pollen a trope where a character, if exposed to the substance which doesn't necessarily has to be pollen, becomes instantly horny and ready to bone.
Cue a walking excuse for a dick who conveniently looks like a human male supermodel dipped completely in ink with some wisps of smoke at his shoulders, Idk how he's supposedly supermodel handsome if she can't even see his face, but hey, we're not here for any semblance of logic,
Adeline gets it on with him and his identical clone, "My tongue squirmed between their angry heads, as if they were two fingers trying to pluck my muscle out, . . I rubbed my tits and flicked my nipples, pleasuring myself and teasing the men, "You want me to suck your balls" The men nodded, I licked my lips. "Then put them in my slutty mouth, "" The writing style is giving me Bored And Horny In GradeHomeroom,
More clones have appeared in order to fulfill Ravejoy's bukkake fantasy, But I've never heard of any bukkake scene have a dude jack off with the woman's forehead "A third cock appeared on my forehead and started rubbing itself, " I'm not a spring duck but I'm no expert, This just doesn't seem like how you would go about a bukkake,
Thankfully this was just a horny hallucination before we get to the real merdude dicking, We learn that Adeline is Eris's Fated Mate, her name divined along with his at his birth, Eris is blue and scaled, and still hooded, We get a bit of worldbuilding here, which is a nice surprise amidst the fuckings, Once the hood is off though, we learn that he's blue and scaled all over,
"His mouth opened farther and engulfed my entire boob, slurping it like it was jello, " And here I was thinking that Ravejoy was going to cop out of the actual monster part of monsterfucking, He gives the same gaping fish maw treatment to her pink nether lips, No dead fish in this Leviathan amirite,
""Yo wonno see me swollow", . . I smiled and gargled his seed, " Okie dokie, I'm tapping out,
I lied, I couldn't look away and I wish I did because he plows her anally with ZERO preparation, like no lube or spit NOTHING just doing it raw and somehow she doesn't chafe because plot armor.
This is a horror movie,
The next few pages were a blur because I was working through some nautical trauma, Expect a lot of the usual screaming, cervix plowing, cumflation, etc etc,
I've wondered if Ravejoy splat out these stories as a meme before there were memes inI guess, But these aren't cleverly written enough, nor poke any fun at themselves to hint at any level of selfawareness, As much as I wish that the case were otherwise, Ravejoy seems to have written these as Serious Erotica, I'm already spooked and it's not even Halloween yet,
In conclusion: if you want to read merman
porn, please do yourselves a favor and read The Shape of Water by Daniel Kraus and Guillermo del Toro, Book source Free on Amazon
Adeline goes on a cruise and while shes being sexually satisfied on the deck, a storm rages and the waves pull her into the sea.
She wakes up to find shes been kidnapped by a merman, Wild sexual fantasy or worst nightmare, which will it be
Fairly wellwritten, kinda hot, and romantic, this comes across closer to a paranormal or fantasy romance than monster porn.
The merman is definitely different, but not exactly monsterish, Still, a pretty great read,
My Dear . . what to say
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Sex really wasn't hot even though there was a lot of it, Read out like a young inexperienced boy might have wrote it, Im a lover of fantastical tales and vivid worlds, I love to write erotica that pushes the limitations of the imagination and wows my readers, along with turning them on I'm a lover of fantastical tales and vivid worlds.
I love to write erotica that pushes the limitations of the imagination and wows my readers, along with turning them on sitelink,