Gain His Voice, His Command Developed By Vonna Harper Presented In Text
FRiend,
The more I read, the more respectful I have of the importance of context,
His Voice, His command is a short erotic story where a man is teaching a woman the joys of submission.
The reader is deliberately kept in the dark about the context of the event and relationship of the characters, instead concentrating on their immediate actions and responses.
I'm not sure how much that setup worked for me, Having some story background helps whet my appetite and gives me something concrete to attach my imagination to and build on, Though I found it hard to connect to initially, it eventually hit on many of my particular BDSM kinks and therefore still gets four from me.
It's thrilling to read about your own kinks,
Depending on what you are looking for, you may want to keep in mind that this erotic Naughty Nooner is very light on romance.
ok, this is erotica, an adult book, and I understand domination and I like to read it, but this short read just didn't do it for me, you have to connect with at least one character in a book, at the very least.
. . and I just couldn't, even in most shorts I find one I like or can relate to, . . This is a very short, erotic read,
I wasn't impressed with either the writing voice or the story, The master/slave element seemed contrived and the basic premise rather silly, I was hoping for something different at the end, but wasn't surprised with how it ended,
I'm giving itbecause I was curious enough to read to the end, I'm not sure
if this story was done with or not, I don't know if I missed something or there were some holes in the story, I think I liked the characters but they need some more development some how, Hot! I didn't realize until I saw all the other reviews that the ending of this story was supposed to be a surprise.
It seemed fairly obvious from the getgo to me, which is perhaps why I didn't find the story upsetting, Mainly though, it felt really inauthentic to me, I didn't believe in either the "master's" domination or the "slave's" submission they both seemed like poseurs, A tiny bit of romance at the end felt tacked on, This is another one I got free for the Kindle, A powerful woman gives up her power to a dominant man who is apparently a stranger to her, This is also essentially a short story, Well written. This isn't a book, but apage short story that was a freebie download from barnes and noble, Just a quickie story to kill some time, It wasn't fantastic, but I've read worse, It was free. Other than that, don't waste your time, A very hot and well written BDSM fantasy short! Extremely compelling, The first part of the book seems like it is missing, Not half bad. I won't be rating this book with a star because I think that would be unfair to the author, Let me say it was extremely well written, Original sentence structure and all that, but it was the layout of the story that horrified and repulsed me that made it hard to read and rate this story.
There us NO romance in this story until the last paragraph, and even then, what was done to the character felt like a slow rape scene.
Yuck. Yuckity yuck yuck.
It's not my scene, I'll leave it at that, Well written though. It was interesting. I like and am into BDSM but in a safe enviroment with someone who has the knowledge, . this kinda threw me because she had no idea if he knew what he was doing or not, But, if I had to go strictly on mind games, I would say it was pretty good, I did like this book, The eroticism relies more on the psychological than the physical, which makes it a little unique, I would have liked to have seen a little more on the setting, but the lack of setting also contributed to the psychological impact.
Based on this story, I would recommend this author, Lame. She hires a man to treat her like a slave, He failed. He failed as a master, she failed as a slave, they should have just had sex and moved on, It's a freebie, and that's the only thing I liked about this story, The H/h if I might call them that were unlikable, the sexcapade was out of my comfort zone BDSM isn't my thing and the ending was a downer.
Ugh! shudders
An Ellora's Cave Naughty Nooners story,
A door closes behind Rina, trapping her in a sensual world, A powerful and imposing man orders her to surrender everything to him, Heart hammering and body crying out for sex, she begins to obey the male she calls Sir, With the loss of each piece of clothing, she sinks deeper into sensation, A part of her wants to flee, to return to order and reason, but how can she think, let alone act, when his hands freely roam her captured body As for Sir, he won't accept anything less than total obedience from his sex slave.
I was stuck on rating this one, I think it needed a bit more in the beginning of the story to draw you in, Maybe a little info on her, How / Why she made decision to hire him, What she was looking for "Something" Anything that would have helped relate to her.
Anyways gave it an OKstars, Would have give amore than likely if I had cared for or even understood the characters, Not even worth a review First off, I have to say that I loved this short! Being someone that has a deeply personal love for the BDSM life style, this was a very tame version of that lifestyle.
It was a step by step progression of a woman that paid, yes she paid for the BDSM experience therefore whispers It is not rape if you pay for it and say “Dominate me hunky Master man.
” The book had great pace for me, I could really get into the womans thoughts, I loved that we really didnt know their names it made it mysterious and gave it almost a role play vibe, It was a perfect example of an introductory experience of that D/sub lifestyle,
I understood her inner struggle and the urge to fight back at the words “Master and slave”, He laid it out for her, said this is what we are doing to do, this is how it is going to be, and Im fairly sure the woman had a safe word if she wanted to stop.
Unfortunately, that was the one mistake of the author, she made too much
of a situation that seemed like a no way out.
For me I got it, I could tell by the dialogue that this was all set up and Im sure if she cried out RED save word, the guy would stop!
I want to say that if you are curious about reading D/sub erotica that this is a great way to put your feet in first and experience it from the role play point of view.
But reading the other reviews on this book, I have a feeling that most people didnt get it, I would recommend this to anyone that loves BDSM, It was a short and I knew that I would not get emotional with the characters, I would read it as a quick scene and either be left going eh or going OH YUMMY I liked that one! I really liked it, I rated it a five without even thinking about it!
I think Vonna wrote a great quick short, which I enjoyed very much, being a fan of this style of kink in erotic fiction.
I will be looking up more stories by Vonna!
Just not my cup of tea, . Not into the whole domination thing, . . wasn't into this story at all, A quick little story about a woman who gives up control of a sexual encounter, and enjoys it, I've seen some claim that this was a rape scene, but I disagree, It was good, but because it is so short, there is no room for romance or back story of any kind, so it's kind of empty.
An ok freebie. This was ok. I didn't really connect with the characters and this was more of just a scene, I couldn't get pulled in or really interested in it either, I didn't really feel any emotions or connection between the characters, although it was implied, Fine to read for passing time or nothing else to read, Good Luck Don't know what to write really, I just didn't connect with the characters Read this earlier today, . It is erotica so if that is not your thing I would suggest that you not read the story,
It is essentially about a woman who is an Executive in a corporate setting always in control, who allows herself to be controlled sexually.
What you do not know until the end is that she paid for the session and it was not forced as the story makes it appear.
I read this in ebook form so I can not tell you how long the book in page form, but the story was very short and left a lot to be desired.
I do believe if she would lengthen the story it would be a great read,
It was an okay read, Seemed a little tame, but I guess for someone wanting to try this type of lifestyle, it could give them an idea of how to start so they can work their way in.
This story just didn't do it for me, It says a lot when you cannot even finish a short story, especially an erotic one, I didn't find it interesting enough to continue, It was very boring. The voice was loose and even though this is a short, a reader has to be able to connect with at least one character to care about finishing the story.
I found nothing at all original about the scene, in fact the sex sounded like something that had been copied out of Basic Instinct.
I think the author tried too hard to be "unique" with this but it turns out being over the top and tedious.
The dialogue was laughable, corny and it made the sex scenes humorous other than erotic, Este conto faz parte de vários publicados pela Elloras Cave,
Aqui, somos atirados para uma cena em que uma mulher, independente que tem de tomar decisões todos os dias, aprende as bases da submissão perante um Dom de BDSM.
Creio que irá agradar aos curiosos e/ou aos que seguem este estilo de vida,
in: sitelink wordpress. co Under her real name, Vonna Harper has published fiction than she can keep track of, These include category romances for the major players as well as the juicy stuff, She also penned a series of well received Native American historicals, One earned her finalist status in both the Women Writing the West Willa award and Pacific Northwest Booksellers Association, Before discovering romances, both erotic and otherwise, Vonna confessed all kinds of nonsense for the confession magazines, When asked about erotica research, she insists, Of course Ive time traveled to the ancient Everglades, infiltrated bondage strongholds, done wilderness search and rescue, and spent a night trapped in a workout gym with Mr.
Universe. How can I possibly Under her "real" name, Vonna Harper has published fiction than she can keep track of, These include category romances for the major players as well as the 'juicy' stuff, She also penned a series of well received Native American historicals, One earned her finalist status in both the Women Writing the West Willa award and Pacific Northwest Booksellers Association, Before discovering romances, both erotic and otherwise, Vonna 'confessed' all kinds of nonsense for the confession magazines, When asked about erotica research, she insists, "Of course I've time traveled to the ancient Everglades, infiltrated bondage strongholds, done wilderness search and rescue, and spent a night trapped in a workout gym with Mr.
Universe. How can I possibly write about something I haven't experienced"As for day jobs, "I've been a commercial pilot, brain surgeon, worked as a white water river guide, bee keeper, snake charmer, and garbage collector.
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