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lazy Karachi evening, Brigadier Azad is preoccupied with thoughts of his mistress, when he is disturbed by the urgent news of a coup threatening the peace in Pakistan.

In crisp military prose and with classic dry wit, Fatima Bhutto lays bare the constant tussle between the military and everybody else.
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Democracy by Fatima Bhutto is a short fiction set in thes when military coup overturned civilian government.
It's a fictional reenactment of Nawaz Sharif's infamous folly of sacking Musharraf midflight and nearly getting him killed,

Infidelity and Hijacking

The story follows life of Brigadier Azad who was enjoying swimming in Sindh Club while waiting for his mistress Sharmilla, and a caravan of military vehicles under Major Jamshed arrive with emergency orders.
Azad leaves to immediately secure the airport for plane's landing while a drunk Sharmilla is news casting on national television.


Karachi of thes

There is a distinctive feel ofs Karachi as the events progress, though the speed of the story and clear lack of background information causes confusion in what decade the story is set in.
Airport, Sindh Club and PTV headquarters are the primary

places the story takes place and their descriptions have been lightly touched.
At one point the author says the capital must be now secured byBrigade, It is unclear if the brigade was deliberately calledand not the realInfantry Brigade stationed at the capital.


Infidelity mostly

Apart from Honor to serve their "True" Army Chief rather than the one imposed on them so suddenly, infidelity is dominant theme of the story where Brigadier Azad is keeping himself unavailable to his wife Kiran while trying to find every reason to be with Sharmilla.
Throughout the whole story he is worried about missing his date with her and thinking about ways to make up for it in the next few days, unaware of her own doings until he sees her on television drunkenly reading the news.


Crisp Language, Worldly People

Most characters seems to be following their instincts, Major Jamshed, trying to avoid becoming an imposter like his father under Zia Kiran, screaming to look for her husband Brigadier Azad, worried about both securing airport and pleasing his mistress Sharmilla, trying not to look so drunk while reading the news to the applause of politicians.
There are some formatting issues and script errors, such as "its tyres" written as "itstyres" which are aplenty for a fiction of such short length.


Final Verdict

Democracy is an interesting but pointless fiction on thes coup.
It seems to be a writing exercise that was published as an afterthought rather than a real work of fiction as it ought to be.
Fatima Bhutto studied at Columbia University, and the School of Oriental and African Studies at the University of London.
Her work has appeared in The Daily Beast,New Statesman, and other publications, She was a featured panelist at theDaily Beast Women in the World Summit, and has been featured on NPRs Morning Edition, CNN, and in the pages of Marie Claire.
She currently lives in Karachi, Fatima Bhutto studied at Columbia University, and the School of Oriental and African Studies at the University of London.
Her work has appeared in The Daily Beast,New Statesman, and other publications, She was a featured panelist at theDaily Beast Women in the World Summit, and has been featured on NPRs Morning Edition, CNN, and in the pages of Marie Claire.
She currently lives in Karachi, " sitelink.