that is USTfilled.
Conceptually great, with sexual tension and a strong external conflict, but it drags and not because of the UST.
Seriously, half the fun of Stetopher is watching Chris and Peter use their vast experience to take apart Stiles.
I had insomnia, it worked, Peter's nice and sassy which I like,
Favorite quote: “No, redundant would be if I said you lack intelligence and are stupid.
Stiles/Peter/Chris
I clearly stated that you have bouts of exceptional intelligence, Youre just tragically hampered by your moments of stupidity, ”
Not bad, It started off well and then ran out of steam and got draggy,
Also: not copyedited AT ALL, I THOROUGHLY enjoyed this fic, This was a soul bond fic, where Chris and Peter are soul mates, and the day Stiles turns, his soul mark appears, and Chris and Peter's changes, letting them know that they have another mate.
I thought this was fairly true to character, particularly Stiles and Peter, Sassy Peter, sarcastic, hyper, insecure Stiles, and calm and grounding Chris, they blended very well together,
The story was unexpected, in that it focused more on the guys finding and getting to know each other, and some various action/danger hijinks, than a lot of super kinky sex.
Not that sex is a BAD thing, I just find that too many fics of this sort focus solely on that aspect of the relationship.
This fic built up the relationship, and doesn't get down to the smexing in the next to last chapter, then we got quite the nice three way action!
Stiles had his moments of insecurity, both in how the sex would work leading to some hilarious conversations with his dad!, and how he can possibly fit in with someone who has been together as long as Chris and Peter have.
Almost entirely noncanon, the only thing from the show that really appeared was the Alpha pack, and vague allusions to the ArgentsKate and Derek who never makes an appearance, I don't think he was even named, just "Peter's Nephew".
One tiny little niggle with the writing is that the author tended to use "Stiles'" very often, where no apostrophe was needed, but it didn't really detract from the story for me.
The beginning was great, full of promise but sadly it didn't quite deliver,
There was a lot of your/you're mixups and unnecessary apostrophises Stiles', . .
For me it was the action plot that made the story drag, there were too many distractions for me to feel any apprehension and I was wanting back to exploring the dynamic between the newly soulbonded.
Instead action took the focus from the slow build and then there was a sex scene tacked on the end, which seemed all or nothing.
It seemed to miss steps the Sheriff meeting the two men, running background checks, he didn't make any attempt to ask their attentions towards his young son! And it amused me thatyrold freshly bonded Stiles still had to attend school or his father would be called.
Chris/Peter didn't seem at all bothered by having a teenager added to their relationship, there was no suggestion of keeping it platonic.
However Peter is delightfully sassy, Chris very contained and Stiles flaily overshare, I think if the fic had stayed focused on them getting to know each other it would have been so much better.
I really liked the differences between the three, This was a.star read for me, very enjoyable,
Again more than a twosome is not really my thing but this was a good story.
The characters seemed true to the show as well, I am rather fond of Mr, Argent.
EDIT: Akira has lots of other cute reads on Archiveofourown Aotoo,
Edit: The nextparts of this story on AOwere pretty good, I thought partwas quite clever,
seriously bad,
if it wasn't the creative spelling or all the characters sounding exactly the same or stiles behaving like a finalist for a
Darwin Award.
. .
no, actually, that's mostly it, bad story is bad. Teen Wolf Fanfic
Chris Argent/Peter Hale/Stiles Stilinski
Peter looked at Stiles from the corner of his blue eyes and smirked.
Stiles swore he saw a flash of red Peters eyes, but it might of have been his brains lack of oxygen making him hallucinate.
“Im looking for my soul mate, Christopher Argent. I believe he volunteered to be taken in for questioning, ”
An iron fist clenched Stiles' heart, This man was ArgentsChristophers soul mate
Stiles stared at the Peters wrist, examining every detail of Peter's soul mark.
Stiles couldnt find anything different between his and the blonds,
Stiles lifted his hand and ghosted his fingers along Peters forearm,
It was lightning all over again, and Stiles yanked his hand back, only to have it caught in an unbreakable grip.
Frosty blue eyes burrowed into Stiles', and he couldnt stop himself from gulping, The smirk on Peters lips grew as the corner of his mouth quirked higher, and he drew Stiles hand close to his face.
Peters nostrils flared slightly as he stared at Stiles soul mark, He pulled Stiles forward, pressing soft lips to Stiles wrist,
“Now what would your name be” Peter purred,
Words:complete I plead guilty to being a COMPLETE SUCKER for this story, which I've reread several times.
There are a lot of things I lovedthe soul mate trope itself, the Stetopher combination, which I'd never seen before, how well the author captures Chris and Peter's different ways of relating to Stiles, I even liked the Alpha Pack plotline.
Like a lot of other reviewers, I found the writing pretty roughcertainly more errorfilled than usual for fanfics I'll actually finish, but I liked the fic more than enough to motor through.
Basically, this has become one of those feelgood favorites for menot totally sure why, but there it is.
A good story that starts out stronger than it finished, It does need some serious editing, even by fan fic standards, Fanfic Author.
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