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is my hero!!

When I started this book, I knew Id be in for quite an adventure, I loved Aces headstrong, cando attitude, It was quite refreshing to have a FMC handle herself the way Ace did, The spice was fantastically steamy and I loved getting to know the guys through out the books however I do wish we could have had more peeks into their pasts than the little snippets we got here and there.
But all in all, well done, Interesting series concept nonmagicbeliever Ace is a detective, receive old house from unknown aunt and suddenly her beliefs are shot to heck! First, her gargoyle statues come to life as gorgeous men yum! Then she finds out vampires, witches and ghosts are real! The firstbooks were great but I felt a little let down on the conclusion.
There was enough info and closure for me it seemed a little rushed, but still an entertaining read I can't knock this series as it has kept me somewhat sane in these current circumstances and I have enjoyed reading the books.
However I did find it a tad repetitive and I must admit I was expecting more from Ace, I was hoping we would get to see her grow with her powers and become this all powerful witch, I also wanted to see the relationships with the "boys" become something a little more than how it ended,
I feel it all ended a little suddenly and I'm left a little disappointed, Great Story

I loved this series, The character development was amazing and the author has a way of keeping you on the edge of your seat, Its definitely different from other fantasy series Ive read but thats the best part about it, I cant say anything about the adult rated scenes because I skipped over it all so Ill let someone else speak to the quality of those.
But the story itself was incredible, Ace really goes through some growth and there are twists and turn that I definitely didnt see coming which was refreshing, “Her Dark Protectors” series was an enjoyable read imaginative storylines throughout the four novels, nicely written main characters, and a great detective novel vibe unusual, I think, for a paranormal, reverse harem romance.
Unfortunately, for me, there were too many grammatical/incorrect word usage errors and continuity issues for a rating greater thanstars,

What kept me reading:

All of the books read like mystery/detective novels, This was wonderful for me because I am a huge fan of the late Sue Grafton and I have to say that the authors of “Her Dark Protectors” wrote in a style that was reminiscent of Ms.
Graftons Kinsey Milhone “alphabet” novels except that Ms, Grafton wrote in first person PAST tense,

There was enough romance/erotica in the series to satisfy pun intended, but not so much that the plot suffered, which is a huge plus in my mind.
In fact, one of my favorite passages was a musing by the main heroine “Acelina” or “Ace” about one of the main heroes “Jacques”: “I never knew someone could do that to meto be both the shelter and the storm.
” Nicely done!

I also loved the characters they thoroughly entranced me and I liked how the various relationships played out, Because the authors created relatable characters who never strayed too far from their original personalities, none of their conversations or actions jolted me out of the story.


What made me question the investment of my time:

The errors snatched me away from the story repeatedly, Throughout the book, incorrect words were used, such as “illusive” instead of the correct “elusive” and “illicit” instead of the correct “elicit, ” Unfortunately, there were more of these type errors than I could easily stomach,

Continuity errors included one of the main heroes who are winged putting on a Tshirt BEFORE he puts on an amulet that temporarily gets rid of his wings a comment in Bookregarding how much the air conditioner rattles the house, but in Bookthere are multiple comments about the LACK of AC and most distressing, an antagonists name gets changed from “Marissa” to “Melissa.
” There were more of these types of errors than I have listed here and, each time I ran across one, I stopped and thought, “Wait a minute, thats not right, is it” I found myself repeatedly quitting the novels to search back through previous pages, trying to make sure my recollections were accurate.
This isnt a good look for ANY novel,

I also would have liked to have seen more of Ace developing her talents as a witch, Especially in the last book, it felt as though this heroine went from novice to superhero in the blink of an eye, Additionally, as a corollary to this criticism, I did feel a little shortchanged by Book, I really wanted to spend more time with these characters, but felt as though the authors were sprinting to the finish line while leaving the poor readers in the dust.


Finally, the narrative voice pushed one of my “meh” buttons, I really do not care for novels written in first person present tense, but my preferred third person omniscient seems
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rare these day in this particular genre.
In my mind, first person present tense should be relegated to recipe howtos or lectures, as in “First, I measure a cup of flour” or “I need to find the lowest common denominator before I can” but this is just my preference.


In closing, while I did like the novels in the series and wouldnt advise against reading them I cant wholeheartedly recommend them because I was so jolted from thorough enjoyment by the aforementioned errors especially those in the continuity department.


Sadly, this isnt the first series Ive read that has suffered from a lack of proofreading/editing, It makes me wonder what is happening in book publishing these days and, more importantly, what can be done to rectify the situation,
Interesting and entertaining

I enjoyed the books a lot, but they do need some editing, The author uses “recant” in place of “recount” several times, and the evil witchs name somehow changed from Marissa to Melissa in book, Nevertheless, the storyline was compelling and the characters intriguing, A goodread

Finally finished the series, Honestly, I loved this series, It has some humor, some sad, and some romance, Overall the basis of book is good, However, I will say there is graphic descriptions in the sexuality, but you can skip over that part, I love the characters. Not sure if this series has spinoff or if there is more to come, Fantastic series!

I love how these books blend the mystery and action of police detective work alongside hot and steamy reverse harem romance, with a big dose of magical intrigue.
It's crimebusting, mysterysolving, magicmaking, paranormal greatness! Wasnt sure how to rate this one, It definitely held my interest but I wanted more out of the books, I felt most of the story was on repeat a lot of the time, Everyday mimicked the day before etc, Kind of silly that I can tell you every meal they ate throughout the series, I think the focus could have been elsewhere, Without giving anything away, I was frustrated we waited until the end of the book to really get somewhere, and it wasnt as exciting as Id hoped it would be.
Kick butt Detective, Witch, With four Gargoyles protectors.

Detective Acelina Bisset is a homicide detective,who tends to investigate the stranger cases, Ace as she likes to be known as inherits a creepy old house,with two large gargoyles besides the front door, And two more on the roof, Planning on selling the property,Ace decides to check it out , But after a hard shift she just want to get in and out.
But As the sun goes down she is confronted with the gargoyles coming to life in front of her,
The more Ace gets to know the guys ,the more she discovers that her new life with her guys and her work becomes intertwined.

Vampires,demons and a reverse harem, Total action. Brilliant. Excellent story

This was a wonderful read, I got so emerged into Ace's story I would read until I killed my battery! The way the author's wrote out the story had me turning page after page.
I never felt lost in the story line every question was answered, Will definitely be reading more by these ladies,