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Would totally recommend for anyone that likes to read about DDlg, This is a great first book of a series, I love how the characters are introduced, I had quite a few problems with this one, This book should have been written from a first person point of view, I honestly feel like it would have benefited from it, The third person POV made everything feel like it was being told and it didnt give me a chance to get connected to the characters.
While I have already said a few things that made this not the best, there are two main factors that really dragged my rating down completely.
One, I dont like when .
Im used to the hero in my romance being so possessive that nobody would see his woman like that but him.
Hated that the author threw that scene in this book, Second, this ended in a strange cliffhanger, Its almost like the story just ended, I saw that the next book is about Brylee and Caleb so Im wondering if we ever get to see Darian and Larkin actually have a HEA.
Will I read the next book I dont know, Im still on the fence about it,
sitelinkBlog sitelinkInstagram So, how should I explain this book out, . .
First, it was my intention to pick something up with a heavy dose of ddlg in them, The book sounds perfectly fit for what I wanted,
But, rather than a complex power exchange between a daddy dom and his little girl, I got this unique insight to a situation where there was no power struggle.
Our heroine was a perfect little girl, and our hero had been looking for someone like her all along and things just fell into it.
And that was all the story was, Granted, it wasn't what exactly I wanted but it was a nice read, I'm in middle for this one,is officially the year I explored romance books that centred on dd/lg and for the most part, I really enjoyed them, and this book wasn't one of them even though I thought I would.
I didn't like the dialogue and one scene towards the end, Okay, so the beginning of this was pretty good with the sexual tension and everything, and even after he told her he wanted her to be his little it was still good.
However, it was like the book abruptly skipped months ahead and it was like I was reading a completely different book.
And it was bad, I mean really bad, Im all for ddlg kink, but this was just too much, The main female had told the H she had been called retarded before, Gods! The second half of the book it was like she was, She was completely different than the girl in the first half, It was like she had been dumbed down to ayear old,
I was originally going to rate this book astar when I was enjoying the first half of the book, but after every in thend half, I have to drop it to astar.
So disappointing this book was ruined, it was ok. not my cup of teastars, This was cute. Surface level but cute. Darian and Larkin were fine leads and I did like their relationship, Of course its instalove, this is onlysomething pages but I didnt mind it at all, I liked the smut and there was a public scene here that was fun, Im curious to read book two because it follows Larkins best friend, Brylee and Darians friend, Gage and I think their story is going to be a lot more interesting.
I liked this story, It was entertaining and enjoyable with the exception of the punishment scene, It bothered me that Darian punished Larkin in front of Gage and Brylee, then had sex with Larkin in front of them as well.
That seemed wrong and off from how he had treated her through the rest of the story, I did like the characters, Larkin was sweet, kind, and too innocent for the world, Darian was protective, possessive, and just wanted to take care of Larkin, I wouldn't say it ends on a cliffhanger, but it does end with an unanswered question, Why was Larkin acting differently and pulling away from Darian I would have liked an epilogue to wrap things up.
I do recommend giving this book a chance,
The couple: Darian and Larkin
Romance trope: DD/lg
Series: Daddy
Length:pages
Plot:
Commentary: So, I was enjoying this one up until the last little bit.
That scene in Darian's office Left me feeling a little icky, I guess there's implied consent to spanking within a DD/lg, although the expectation, from what I understand, is that all of that would have been negotiated prior since communication is absolutely key.
So maybe there was talk ahead of time for that scene, although it definitely didn't seem like it, Maybe Larkin didn't mind spontaneously being spanked in front of her friend and Darian's friend, But did she already agree to the spontaneous anal sex punishment in front of the other people And did her friend agree to being spanked and more by the man she metminutes prior, in front of other people In all of the things I have read, that isn't even close to the worst, but it just didn't sit right with me.
As Darian explained to Larkin early in the story and then apparently promptly forgot, these are women, not actual little girls, so taking away their ability to negotiate sex acts and punishments seems counterintuitive to that explanation.
But even though Larking was an adult and knew she was and wasn't Little all the time although I wonder maybe she was, she described her dress as showing her "boobies," and I thought that was a little weird but not as strange as her continued reference to herself as "retarded" which although Darian made sure to tell her was wrong, it seems the same outcome understanding that Larkin had low selfesteem about her intelligence or ability to comprehend could have been achieved with other words dumb, stupid, etc.
. And they all rolled their eyes a lot both main characters, I would have liked to have read another reaction or to have the eyerolling only when it most made sense.
Also, that ending was weirdly abrupt,
Grammar/formatting: needed another pass with a proofreader for commonly confused words to/too, your/you're, etc.
Next book in the series: sitelinkDaddy's Little Princess
So im no novice too ddlg books i read them a lot i know the ins and outs you may say.
I was suggested the author by another reader, I liked the book the characters but feel it needs an over haul so too speak, I like how they meet i love the Alpha daddy ish ness too Darian and his instant connection too Larkin but felt there was a lot missing especially getting in to a ddlg relationship you need openness honesty boundaries as such.
Also the smexy scenes need a vital smexy injection of heat the ending smexy scene boggled me too,
I wish there was an epilogue, Im curious so i will get book, Me pareció muy tonto. A dd/bg or Daddy dom/Little relationship is something beautiful and personal,
In this it was unrealistic more kink and sex than relationship and lifestyle,
Then towards the end the H sexually punidhed and fucked the h infront of his friend without her consent or previous discussion and her friend.
At the same time his friend sexually punished her bestie even though they had just met and she had not consented to anything.
No thank you,
It is cheapening that kind of relationship and not a true representation of the dd/bg Daddy dom/Little dynamics.
What the H wanted was a master/slave relationship with a daddy/little kink and nothing else,
Want my Daddies possessiv and shielding towards their Little,
Read some reviews and it turns even more nonexclusive furter along in the series,
Not for me,
For those who do not share my view of things,
Enjoy your reading!”Daddy Darian”
Larkin lay still and let her daddy take what he wanted, knowing she deserved everything she got, and held back her pleas for more.
She hid a smile. She would never tell him she craved this kind of attention from him and enjoyed it when he took her that dominant way.
A quick, hot and steamy daddy kink romance, This is one of my favourite tropes and this one sounded interesting to me, It was short and full of heat, I liked the pace and the daddy and his little concept that was going on this one, It was by a new to me author and the writing was really good,
Something about her had opened up a portion of him he hadnt known existed, He realized a big part of himself had been missing until he found her,
It wasnt about her innocence, although that turned him on, It was the fact he wanted to not only be her lover and friend but also her daddy,
Darian is looking for his little, the one woman he can look out for and love the way he was meant to.
Soon fate works in his favour when he literally rescues Larkin from few guys, He is instantly attracted to and protective of her, He looks out for but somehow she slips away from him but not for long,
Larkin has always felt different from girls her own age, Shes twenty three but is still clumsy and awkward as a little kid or more like innocent, Having spent years in foster care and been called freak her whole life, shes determined to grow up and learn the way of life.
Clearly she fails at that and when she sees her knight in shining armour, her first instinct is to run.
Her eyes widened when he immediately pulled out and started pressing the head of his cock into her bottom hole.
“Daddy, it burns,” she whimpered,
“I know, baby, but this is part of the punishment, ” He grunted and then bottomed out inside of her,
His breaths came in pants, “Now, Im going to ride you hard and fast, and youll take it like a big girl, wont you”
Larkin sniffed and nodded against the cold wood of the desk.
“Yes, daddy. ”
Darian has long reach and soon finds her and is drawn to her innocence and knows that she is exactly the little hes looking for.
Their relationship progresses at a fast paced and it was super hot to watch, I liked how dirty daddy Darian was and just how sweet he also could be,
Overall it was a good read for a bed time story, The plot was pretty simple, Its perfectly right for passing the time with lots of steam, Im definitely looking forward to reading about the secondary characters mentioned, ““Im never letting you go,” he murmured to himself, Hed finally found the woman who fit him, and hed move heaven and earth to keep her with him, ”
So the DD/lg genre isnt more normal thing but variety is the spice of life and every once in awhile I pick one up.
I have to say that this is probably the best of the genre that Ive read so far and the clear and concise explanation from Dominic on what this particular “kink” was clarifying and enlightening to me.
I recommend this book for those who not only enjoy this genre on a regular basis but also for those who just want to try it out.
Ill definitely being reading more books in this series, Great job to the author, I found this book awkward! Great start to the series
I liked the start to the series.
I loved the way he has a no nonsense kind of attitude when it comes to his control, He does not take no for an answer but he is sweet and understanding about it, This should be an interesting series and I look forward to reading more,
Felt like this book is missing something, Darian's character is flat considering he's supposed to be a Daddy in this book It's kind of just Larkin calling him Daddy, and that's it.
Larkin is just the perfect Little that Darian is looking for, Innocent seems to be an understatement when describing Larkin, which unfortunately didn't work well for me because the "Little" here is a littleeee too extreme for my liking.
that being said, there's still plenty of steam though it's a fast paced one,
Изначально книга очень сладкая, как для подростков. и я не увидела химии между героями. потом вся сладость уходит и есть момент как он трахал ее перед его другом и ее подругой, думаю в следующих книгах нас ждет всеобщая оргия. я не поклонник такого. My Own Daddy is the first book in Lila Fox's Daddy Series, In this book we meet the lead charactersLarken and Darian, These two are polar opposites, She is the product of the foster care system, emotionally wounded, alone, innocent and vulnerable, He is a rich, strong and alpha male with a close network of friends, Fate brings these two together when he witnesses her being accosted outside a local bar, He sweeps in and rescues her taking her to his condo, This book reveals the initial stage of their DD/LG relationship Will these two end up together What challenges will they face To discover these answers you have to read this book.
As the first book in a series, in addition to the main characters, we are introduced to a cast of supporting characters.
Ms. Fox masterfully not only creates complex primary characters her secondary characters are equally complex, For instance, Brylee is Larkin's childhood and best friend, Like Larkin she is emotionally wounded, Together they help each other navigate the harshness of their world, Darian's inner circle of friends are also multilayered, I appreciate how Ms. Fox introduced them to support her characterdriven plot and set readers up to learn about each one in other books in the series.
Great hook.
I enjoyed the way Ms, Fox uses literary devices to help move her plot along and to reveal the layers of her character's personalities, Her use of dialog as her characters interact definitely move the plot at a smooth pace, Through the use of internal dialog, we witness a foreshadowing on Darian's part to his greatest fear that Larken will leave him.
Will this happen Her use of dual point of view provides backstory to these characters endearing them to readers, Her use of descriptive language paints vivid and realistic scenes allowing readers to feel that they are firsthand witnesses to the drama that unfolds.
Well done Ms. Fox. .