Achieve First Day Of Forever By Mary Calmes Listed As Paper Copy

author is hit or miss for me, This one is a miss, I did not like Cameron and I did not like Davis, If I don't like one of the mains, I usually don't like the story, But to not like either one This one didn't stand a chance for me,

I normally love friends to lovers stories, This one had promise. But Cam is a bastard and Davis doesn't do it for me either .

I know it's a short story but there are some major things left undone at the end, This would benefit from being a fulllength book, Maybe then I would like the two main characters, I would have to see some major character development for that to be the case though, maybe some background that showed each character as they went from teenagers to adults, I love Mary Calmes. I will never deny that, She reinvents herself with different novels and this one was no different, The characters weren't all warm and fuzzy nods to Jin and Logan! and they weren't perfect and wonderful nods to Stef and Rand, nor were they a completely mismatched set that works well together nods to Jory and Sam.
They were flawed, real people that had to get over themselves before they could come together, I appreciated that. Now this is different from what I've read by Mary Calmes,
It was told from Top's POV,
It doesn't matter. I still love it. ltCam, now a police detective in Chicago and Davis, a lawyer in San Francisco were best friends through high school and beyond, Although Cam wanted to hook up with Davis when they wereDavis refused because he didn't want to ruin their friendship, He phones in a panic because he wants Cam to come to SF for the party to celebrate him making partner, He's acting strangely and finally tells Cam he was stupid and loves him and wants them to be together now, It's all told from Cam'sst person POV and while he tries to slow down Davis who is all hands and "fuck me now" to find out what brought on ayear change of heart he didn't try very hard.
After all that time I'd be going "WTF" not "yeehaw let's get naked", I sometimes find it hard to relate to characters who act very differently than I would in situations, in love or not,

It was a fast, easy read in between, I couldn't really follow, why suddenly Davis was persuing the relationship after waitingyears, At the end it didn't feel like they have settled anything, On the other hand it was nice that it wasn't a fairy talelike ending, Not my favorite Mary Calmes read, but still good, It definitely felt unfinished. Okay, so Sam Cameron Mancini is a police detective and Jory Daniel is an attractive blonde with golden skin and flashing eyes and they have hot hot sex.
And there's a lot of:

"We should talk,” I said gently, holding him tight in my arms,
I concentrated on breathing, “We need to talk. ”
“What are you talking about”
“Whatre you trying to say” I frowned, wondering what the hell he was talking about,
“Cam,” he rasped his voice cracking as he pressed his face between my shoulder blades, “I need to talk to you okay”
“And youre adorable but I want to talk to you and ”
“I dont wanna talk to you,” he said, swallowing hard.
“I want you to take off your clothes, ”

Ummm, maybe you two should talk

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I just love Mary Calmes, its hot and sexy and its free so I loved this.
Nuff said. :D Loved it!.Another lost review by goodreads,Stars

I'm not sure how to review this short novella, I liked it, the whole idea of it and the fact it was short yet not too short to deliver a solid story, and yet it WAS too short to establish more than a promise of "Forever".


This short sitelinkFree Online Read tells us the story of Cameron Mancini and Davis Boone, they have been best friends their whole lives, through the good times and the bad ones.
They are both gay, and yet when Cameron told his parents he was gay they just accepted him as he is, with Davis it was the opposite they literally threw him out of the house.
Cameron thought THIS is the best time for them to be together as a couple as it's obvious how much they care for one another, but Davis was scared.
Cameron is the only family he has, he can't lose him in a relationship which can totally break them apart if things didn't work out.
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This whole short novella is told from Cameron's POV, Davis invites him to San Francisco when he gets a promotion but there is something else on his mind, As the years go by, both now at their midthirties, Davis is scared of losing Cameron for real so he has to make a move, a real one so Cameron realizes THIS is what he truly wants Davis in his arms.


I liked it but there was something a bit "choppy" about it, Their back and forth was sweet, and at times confusing, They wanted to talk, they wanted to touch, they wanted each other, they live far away and Davis won't come back to their hometown, It was a "broken" conversation the whole while and it was a bit confusing, Yet the story WAS very sweet and though I've known Cam and Davis for a short while I DID wish them a HEA I felt how much they needed to FINALLY have it.


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Well, I knew from the titles this is the FIRST day of forever, But still where's the forever
Okay, . okay, I get it, it's very short story, . . But, hmmm. . after so many years of silence and suddenly Davis can't seemed to control his horny ass over Cameron
I get it, Cam loved him for so long, and still can't moved on even after he had a great relationship with someone.

And I recall , when Davis invited Cam to his house, he didn't know that Cam broke up with his BF, right
And he's planning it already Or am I too dumb to understand the dynamic
I didn't see any good chemistry between the two men, except , they're both horny all the time.

Davis is too clingy and Cam is like, an asswhipped guy over him,
Anyway. . this is just okay reading, easily to forget, but not bad, Not bad at all.

I thought this was a bit fast and unbelievable, From the beginning I could see the feelings of Davis towards Cam and knowing how much Cam loved him back in the day, I could see how these two should end up together.
I did feel, though, that
Achieve First Day Of Forever By Mary Calmes Listed As Paper Copy
the actual progression was too forced, All of a sudden Davis is interested but it was never really explained why outside of seeing Cam flirt with another guy, It didn't seem natural. Also, for me, the ending was closed you know how it ends but I would have loved the story to be a little bit longer with some beef about HOW it really worked.
Very cute but way too short! Davis and Cam have been best friends since forever, Cam wanted more but Davis was too scared to lose the friendship they had, and over the years seeing each other got fewer and farther in between, but all that changes when Davis invites Cam to see him and finally tells him he's always loved him.
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The only problem I had with it, is I wish it would have been lots longer lol
Hot cops and lawyers I could read about those for days! Cameron Mancini and Davis Boone grew up together and ever since high school Cam has known that his best friend was the one.
But Davis family disowned him when he confessed that he was gay and all that remained of his former life was Cameron, Because of this, Davis never wanted the two men to be anything but friends, He didnt want to gamble on forever with his pal, Lately though, Davis has come to see the error of his ways and decides that a chance is exactly what he wants to take, But is it too late to hope for a happy ending,