insta love just wasnt for me, The writing was great and the plot had more potential, Short and sweet
If you want a short sweet sexy story then you will like this, I just wish it would have been more, Conner and Amber are cute together and all but I wish Rosie Raine would have done more with their story, The story is not bad, but of course it has to be fast because it only has a few chapters Man, the H's son is vile! What a horrible piece of dirt he turned out to be.
While the H was swoon worthy! Great short story, Just what the hell. And why Why is the number one question I kept asking myself every couple of seconds while reading this, because I couldn't wrap my head around any of it.
Why was she with this guy, Alex, formonths, that made her feel like shit about herself all the time Why did he and his real girlfriend/fiancée randomly decide to “prank” her by Alex fakedating her Why was Alex so hellbent on making Amber feel worthless “Ill let go of you if you admit that youre an idiot for believing me.
That you are worthless, and no one will ever love you, ” Like, seriously, what the fuck is he on about, You would think he was getting revenge on her for something, but no, he just randomly decided to wastemonths of his life trying to make her think he liked her.
But he was cruel to her the whole time, so it's not like he was doing a great job, Idk, the more I think about it, the more confused and annoyed I get because none of it adds up, There's absolutely no backstory explaining how Amber and Alex met, how or why they starting dating, anything of the sort,
Moving past that, she meets Alexs dad, Connor, on pageor, at her job where Connor, Alex and Alex's new fiancée are celebrating the engagement, and withinminutes of Connor meeting Amber, he offers to buy her place of work if her manager won't let her off so that she can go out on a date with him in the middle of her shiftand he has the audacity to have the thought, “It pains me that she cant believe I would do this for her.
” I WONDER WHY, SIR, Inside voice, Im sorry, But, maybe, just maybe, she doesnt believe it because youve known each other forseconds, Just a crazy thought. Though, she falls for him instantly even after all she just went through with his son, so really her brief hesitation doesn't even matter,
Then Alex swoops back in, stealing his dads phone after the date Connor took Amber on, and sends her a fake message the following morning saying that Connor wont be seeing her again.
Really What is with all the childish theatrics hes going through to make sure Amber isnt happy There is NO explanation for any of it.
It's all resolved quickly though, with Connor showing up at Amber's job that same day and they figure out what happened,
Then, keeping on track with the overwhelming OTT and unbelievable nature of the book this is all happening in underhours of them knowing each other Connor buys Amber a building for the bakery she wanted to open, and quickly following that, they have sex without protection.
Like, she's on the pill, but c'mon, They have known each other less thandays, she's a virgin to top it all off, they haven't went over history so she has no clue if he's clean or not, but she tells him not to use a condom.
. . girl, disrespectfully, you're dumb as hell,
Yeah, no, I can't with this, The writing itself wasn't too bad, a few misspellings that I noted, but that's about it, It's the lack of substance in the story, The only reason I finished it was because it was likepages, Not what I was expecting, Contrary to the cover, the male lead has gray hair and the female protagonist is blonde and is considered fat or chubby, . . no one's alter ego. Not sure why Alex hates Amber bullying for no reason apparently, Glad it's onlychapters. Short
This is a very short story about a age gap couple, I really liked the story line but I felt like everything was crammed into a short book, Good story line just felt rushed and crammed, "Connor lets go of my hand, instead placing his hand on the small of my back, and pulls me closer to him, “Maybe getting you this dress was a bad idea after all, I dont like how those men are looking at you, “ A warm glow of pleasure settles in my stomach, I like that hes possessive, "
I loved this short read, What can I say, I stan a possessive man, The only thing I didn't like about this book was why Connor's son, It wasn't that he was so mean which he was it was just that there was no proper reason for him doing what he did.
It didn't make sense to me the hatred he had for her, And that his fiance encouraged the behavior It was just weird and left me puzzled, It was really good, but too short, The writing was pretty good, and the storyline was interesting enough, But the insta love was just too OTT for me,
Less thanhours after meeting the male protagonist, this woman who is a virgin, by the way decides to have sex with him and specifically says no to a condom without even asking if
he is clean.
After they have sex, neither of them bother even mentioning cleaning up and they just go to sleep, There were some other things that definitely took me out of the story for being too unrealistic, but that sex scene was the biggest one.
FREE on Amazon today!.His son tried to break me, Now he wants to heal me,
Connor Blake is too good to be true, Rich, powerful, kind. And hot as hell.
When he wants to take me out to make up for his sons behavior, I cant say no,
When he tells me Im beautiful, my insides melt,
But he raised the man who wanted to humiliate me, to break me,
I should run from him,
I should keep my heart safe,
But the things he does to my body, mind, and soul
I never stood a chance,
Will Connor heal me Or will he break me so thoroughly I cant put myself back together again
My Fathers Ex is a short and steamy billionaire age gap romance.
No cheating, no cliffhanger, and a guaranteed HEA, Cute story
Short older male younger female insta love story, Had a little heat and fairy tale ending,
It's a fun read,
Short but so sweet,
Sweetest story, I love how even though things were crap she still gave him a chance, A bad day turned into an amazing relationship with someone unexpected ruinzao ein kkkk Again, ashamed to admit I read this, . . Rosie Raine loves writing about women of all shapes and sizes and the strong, sexy men that win their hearts, Her stories are short and sweet with plenty of steam, If you want to be the first to know about new releases, sales subscribe to Rosies newsletter: sitelink Rosie Raine loves writing about women of all shapes and sizes and the strong, sexy men that win their hearts.
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