Pick Up Seedy Business (HardCell, #0.5) Articulated By Damon Suede Distributed In Digital Version

Description: Revenge can get sticky,
This prequel to Grown Men is a crazy scifi short about sperm piracy and sibling rivalry gone seriously wrong.

When corporate mercenary Beirn agrees to a sleazy organ harvest job, he walks straight into his worst nightmare, a trap set by the twin brother he betrayed.
Against his better judgment, Beirn teams up with a semen smuggler to save his own skin and hopefully make amends to the only family he has left.

Loathing turns to lust as the two men grapple with their violent impulses and their growing desire.
In one terrible night, impossible feelings will force Beirn to understand the brother he betrayed and the mistakes he's made.


Warning: doublecrosses, dirty sex, and designer testicles

These stories can be read in any order.


Original Prompt:
Dear Author,
My momma always told me anything was possible.
. . but I'm not too sure she'd considered these boys! Will you prove my momma right

Photo Description:
Two smiling, uncut men stand naked next to each other beside a grey tree on a tropical beach.
One is hypermasculine, allover bigger and hairier than the other, His right arm drapes over the right shoulder of the shorter man, who barely reaches his shoulder in height.


This story was written as a part of the M/M Romance Group's "Hot Summer Days" event.
Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice, Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story.


Download the story, read it sitelinkhere or find it in sitelinkDon't Read in the Closet, Volume or sitelinkDon't Read in the Closet: GayRomLit RetreatSpecial Edition.


Genre: scifi
Tags: gay m/m, sperm piracy, giant, mercenary, criminals, hormones, twins, doublecross, sounding, science fiction
Word Count:,Wow! This was different.
I'd like to read the next book in the series,
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Good Lord Damon! I'm kind of speechless, . . I knew this was going to kind of outthere, but, .

Before tonight, Beirn had never stolen a set of designer testicles,

Now with a start like this, I realized that I'd better be ready for anything!
Beirn amp Zed are fairly despicable characters yet somehow, by the end, I was feeling sorry for them and hoped they would work things out together.
Just how did you do that I mean, to sell Ox's balls, trap him with Zed, yet feel sorry for him Damn!
Then you had me cracking up at some the images you painted:

This is my punishment: a dwarf in heat chucking his muck on me.


So while I have yet to decide if I actually liked this story or not, I certainly can say it was one heck of a story!
Well, after reading it a second time I decided that I do like it, but it gave me a hell of a shock initially!

PS.
I love the cover you created for this Damon it's perfect! Funny, weird, whacko, I was laughing out loud several times, This has explicit erotic gay male sex,

A sperm pirate kidnapped or somehow obtained donors victims, They are strapped down with machines feeding them drugs and milking them every two hours, Beirn is sneaking up on the place, planning to free his brother Ox, Ive never read anything like this, I loved the set up and the authors creative and funny body part terms,

The negatives:
The relationship between the two guys was too vague, I wanted more clarity. It was unfinished.

This is a short story, a free download from Goodreads, It gives a little back story for the sequel “Grown Men, ” The characters in this story are Beirn and Zed, Their story does not continue in the sequel, The characters in the sequel are Ox and Runt,

DATA:
Narrative mode:rd person, Kindle count story length:. Swearing language: strong. Sexual language: strong. Number of sex scenes: two or more hard to count since much of the story is about sperm collection.
Setting: unknown time on another planet, Copyright:. Genre: erotic sci fi gay male fiction, This was a bit hard to get into, But, it did get better, Crazy better Damon,
This little scifi

short was a helluva ride, I love what you did with that prompt, and I love the way you turned the tables on your mc.
. . so smart and sassy.

Now for the shameless begging part,

Would you please write more in this world, with these characters

Pretty please I really enjoyed this one! Definitely one of my fave stories posted so far! :

Fantastic worldbuilding, terrific characters, and I absolutely loved the humour, writing style, and dialogue especially Beirn's internal thoughts! It was such a pageturner, and I was so sad to see it end.


Can we get a sequel Please, please! :D I would love a continuation of their story/adventures, and my innerkink is dying to know what else these two could get up to "between the sheets".
Oh, the possibilities! Haha! :P I'd also love to see some from Zed's PoV as well, :


Story Prompt:
My momma always told me anything was possible.
. . but I'm not too sure she'd considered these boys! Will you prove my momma right

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stars

I thought this was really good until the very end the last page or two, at which point I found one of the characters' attitude shift jarring in its abruptness.
But I rounded up because this little story is free and certainly worth reading, It also gives some interesting and useful backstory for sitelinkGrown Men, a novella which I found excellent and certainly superior to this story.
It also has some elements from this story that make this story feel like a rough draft for that novella.
The world building here is impressive for the length, and Mr, Suede is a solid writer with a mature voice and solid command of the written word, His prose flows and there's none of the stilted, awkward feeling common in m/m writing,

A solid introduction to Mr, Suede's writing and to the HardCell series, but inferior to his longer writing, Huh, I was actually rendered kind of speechless temporarily and that's a minor miracle as well as a compliment! I'm very impressed with the level of world building packed into this short story amazing creativity and imagination.
But more impressive even, is the fact that I was actually kind of rooting for these guys when I really just wanted to hate them skillz, man! And to think Beirn has a twin whoa Kudos on one of the most unique and original stories I've read.
Great job, Damon. Thank you:

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