Achieve Smartass Constructed By Lynn Lorenz Exhibited In Booklet

love this type of stories and the tough guy/soft guy attraction where they end up rescuing each other, Lovely. Really cute, short and fun,
Well done. Awww man I want more of these two! It ended too soon, So glad they found each other! So sweet! A short story, . . With a slowburn building in the relationship And one that was so sweet and hot at the same time
I'm thoroughly speechless.

I can't deny I was a bit put off sometimes with the idea that the first thought on the characters' minds was to get into each other's pants although it made sense that it wouldn't go deeper than that at first but in general the development was so nice.
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Great, great short story, The characters had depth and personality, and the premise of the story was gripping and wonderfully excecuted, It had true emotion, something that, regardless of my minimal, but annoying bitching, I

just can't not find myself fascinated by, This story truly swept me off my feet, A brat finds his hero, Dirk sees Ricky getting into trouble and running out of a bar and all of his protective instincts kick in, Its a short so things move really quickly but I liked these two, Dirk is really gentle and patient with Ricky and Ricky takes the time to step back and think about what it is that he really wants.
LHNB Story released
Just overstars
A trouble making brat catches the attention of a former marine as he deliberately starts a bar fight.
There was instant attraction but not instalove in this short story which shows the start of a relationship, yet another lovely story from the LHNB event, This one is short but incredibly cute, I'd love to see more of Dirk and Ricky, It would be great to see how their relationships develops, as well as to see them get a wonderful happy ending : It started off fun but got a little boring halfway through.

Ricky is a hot little ticket and he knows it, He likes to walk into a room and stir up trouble, then leave the scene before he gets embroiled in the fallout, whilst wafting wicked brattiness behind him.


Until Dirk gets his number and calls his bluff, Can a gruff exMarine looking to love and dominate find something in a little needy twink like Ricky Heck yeah, Nice interpretation of the photo and the story letter, Thank you Lynn Lorenz for donating your story, your time and your talent, This was just ok for me, This is a great story, complete and neat, It focuses on Ricky who desperately wants rescuing, and Dirk who can't help himself but be attracted to Ricky's need for security, need for protection.


The characters are depicted deftly and the narrative moves cleanly, Most enjoyable. This is a great story, with a lot of humor, some wonderful vibes between the characters, and perfect pacing and energy, Ricky and Dirk jumped off the pages and became real in my mind as I read about their meeting and being drawn together.
Theyre very different, but like magnets of opposite poles, they are inexorably pulled together,

Ricky is a brat, He lives to antagonize people, start fights, and get in trouble, Somehow he always escapes, until this one time when it looks really bad for him, He has no home to speak of Dirk calls his "apartment" a crack hole, and that's certainly what it sounds like, and nobody who cares about him.
On the streets since he was sixteen, eight years of loneliness have taught him how to defend himself, but the one thing he wants most is missing: someone to care about him.


Dirk is an exMarine who is trying to adapt to civilian life, He is fierce, protects what is his, and runs into Ricky by sheer coincidence, Something calls to him, but he doesnt do relationships or vulnerable, What he does do is protect those who need it, and, from the looks of it, Ricky definitely needs some help, Dirk also wants more, but he wants Ricky to be the one to ask,

If you like stories about a white knight riding in to save a guy in trouble, if you enjoy stories about men who are at opposite ends of the spectrum and make you wonder what could possibly make them stay together, and if you're looking for a read that will pull your heartstrings as it delivers a great mix of hot passion and hope there is someone out there for everyone, then you will probably like this free short story.

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This started off okay but really lost my interest pretty quickly, unfortunately, I want to like it, but it just didn't work for me,.It happens a little bit quick but if you can't connect with your hero right away who can you connect with Ricky, wounded soul just looking for that one guy who's going to care.
So glad he finds one, Lorenz snuck a storydagger through my notsosecret armour chink: prince daddycharming rescues smartass brat for cocksucking and lurve,

Thank you Lynn :D It's sweet and emotional, and it has heart, Ms. Lorenz did a wonderful job at creating Ricky's character, He definitely lived up to my expectations, and Dirk was just so swoonworthy, While they might be worlds apart in personality and background, they couldn't be more perfect for one another, I highly recommend reading this one!

Ms, Lorenz, thank you so much for choosing my prompt! I couldn't be more happy with how this story turned out, This was great! I just loved Dirk and how much he wanted to protect and take care of Ricky, so sweet! I really liked the characters and writing in this, it made for a great short story.
Thank you! Stars

Aptly titled, this free short gives readers ahour peak at how troublemaking, downonhisluck, SMARTASS, Ricky, is rescued and settorights by exMarine and Good Samaritan, Dirk, when the two meet after Ricky is caught causing mischief in a biker bar.


Ricky definitely has a mouth on him, His yearning for acceptance and his need for a firm hand to keep him in line, made nononsense, gentlegiant Dirk the perfect man to take on that kind of challenge.


I liked the dynamic here, but it was probably way too short for me to decide whether I liked these characters or not.
MC is a bit too controlling for me, Ricky is a twinky brat who desperately needs someone to care and protect him, Dirk is a tough ex marine who finds himself drawn to this trouble magnet and his own inner need to be a protector is met when he can't help taking bratty Ricky under his wing.
A match made in heaven, Sweet and sexy I really enjoyed this free short, Very enjoyable. .