Pick Up Finding Submission (Service And Submission, #1) Composed By Megan Michaels Issued As Text
This story really shows another lifestyle, I know people do live this way, and to each their own, Avery definitely needed to be brought around the way Preston and the Judge did it, I love that they end up the way they do, DNF at
Repetitive with a whiny heroine and a ridiculous plot, It was a ok read, . . kind of out there in the whole story line, To me I don't know, . unbelievable and I know its a book, but I did not get it for a deep read: Fast read, harsh punishment, kitty play was all in this ans they fall in love and live happily everafter:Would I recommend yes I would for any one who is wanting a quick little smutty read.
. . Meh. Nothing new here. Megan Michaels is awesome
I love her writing and this book is so intriguing as it goes in depth exploring the D/s relationship.
This is heavy on punishment and the kitty play is a first reading experience for me that part I'm not sure of.
Yet the story is so expertly handed by the Mistress herself, ALTHOUGH I FINISHED BOOK I STRUGGLED WITH SOME OF THE SCENES AND STORYLINE, I FOUND SOME SCENES TOO HARSH WITH DOM/SB RELATIONSHIPS ESPECIALLY SINCE SHE DID NOT I FEEL ENTER WILLINGLY, WAS WELL WRITTEN BUT I BELIEVE HOW THEY ENTERED THE RELATIONSHIP WOULD NEED TO BE REVISED,
I received a free copy of this book to read and review for Wicked Reads Team
Avery is a rich girl who leaves home and tries to make it on her own and finds that she cant.
Avery ends up getting busted for stealing, She doesnt want her dad to find out but after she finds out what her punishment is she might be better off running back to Daddy.
This book was a little farfetched in my opinion I mean seriously that whole punishment scenario would never happen in real life.
Once I got over that and just repeated to myself several times “its just a book” I eventually enjoyed it.
The kitty play was a little odd to me but to each their own, The book was entertaining and I will probably read the next one just to see what other ideas the author has.
Characters: The characters were well written
Sex: yes
Religious: no
Would I recommend to others: yes
More than one book in the series: yes
Genre: BDSM/Romance
Would I read more by this author: yes
Wicked Reads Team
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Avery found herself in trouble with the law and was arrested.
She knew daddy would get her out of it because he is a lawyer and has connections, He did not want his daughter serving jail time, The judge and lawyer in her case decided she needed to have some kind of punishment for her crime, She would be cleaning Brandon's farmhouse for the nextmonths to pay off her fine, Brandon thought she needed discipline, a firm hand and rules to follow, He has special rules she must follow or she would be punished as he seen fit,
I enjoyed Avery sass and her foul mouth, Brandon being a dom helped in her discpline and changed her into a better person, I enjoyed the romance between them, However there was few scenes that I did not like but overall the story was good, I liked how descriptive the scenes were,
It wasn't horrible.
I finished it, so that earns is some extra credit,
There was just nothing real unique about it, I feel like all these stories are about some tall, sexy, rich guy with a fetish for spanking,
In this guys defense, she needed the spankings though, LOL. The girl was an immature child, practically,
And I loved their age gap! I received a copy of this book to read and review for Wicked Reads
This book has everything you might look for in a BDSM relationship novel.
Preston is quite the natural Alpha male Dom and he likes his life amp home orderly, Avery Rose is sort of drifting through life after leaving home for the first time, She takes a job cleaning houses but still unable to meet rent without asking her daddy, she ends up stealing some watches to pawn.
Avery gets sentenced
to help Preston, her appointed lawyer, at his home formonths for her penance, Avery Rose is incorrigible and lacking discipline but Preston has just what she needs, a firm hand! I found this novel highly erotic, covering all bases of D/s relationships including kitten play and many red rear ends.
Thoroughly enjoyed the D/s dynamic of Preston amp Avery! I loved her ongoing sass and foul mouth even when it got her a beating.
Great inner dialog by Avery trying to figure out if submission is for her,
I highly recommend this for any erotic BDSM novel fan, Had it all! Looking forward to reading more by Megan Michaels in the Submission series! Rating:Stars
If you are looking for lots of spanking, this is the book for you! The story of Preston Lawyer, Dom, disciplinarian and Avery Criminal, rich girl.
Avery committed a crime and is placed under house arrest at Preston's home and at his mercy to pay for her crime.
Be Warned: Avery definitely pays for her crime in the form of spankings!
Avery was a very headstrong, independent and stubborn girl.
I thought she made some very poor decisions and her butt paid dearly for them! Preston was a hard as nails alphamale who was not putting up with any of Avery's antics.
From the very beginning, he did not allow her to get away with anything, While he was hard, he also had some very sweet and tender moments that showed how much he wanted to care for Avery.
Overall, it was a good story,
Why NotStars
Since the majority of the story only featured Preston and Avery, there were not many secondary characters throughout the book.
Secondary characters appeared in the early part of the book and at the very end of the book, The middle was all about Avery breaking the rules and Preston spanking and/or punishing her, At some point I became very bored, Don't get me wrong, the sex was smoking hot, but each scene you just knew what was going to happen: Avery messes up, Preston spanks and punishes her, and then they have sex.
Repeat, repeat, repeat. Not much else happened.
Animal kink While I knew the book contained kitty play, it did not leave me in a warm place.
I think it went on too long and it also made me view Preston as being creepy, I just could not wrap my brain around that type of role playing, Not sexy just Not sexy! The description of this book immediately caught my interest and it was an easy decision to click "buy.
" The premise of the book is about a sassy girl being placed under the authority of a dominate, stud lawyer to avoid jail time and to teach her selfdiscipline.
It starts off with a bang, Our heroine is predictably sassy and our dom lawyer takes her over his knee to start her training, All of this was blazing hot and my inner sassyslut was thinking, . . "I hope I have enough batteries in the house, " Sadly, for me the entire book was just okay, Let me try to explain, . .
The story was good, I don't think this is a spoiler because of the Finding Submission's description, There is plenty of spankings and some pet play as our heroine is treated like a kitten for part of the book.
Rules were nicely enforced with spanking consequences, I must admit that I love dom/sub scenarios, spankings and petplay, Usually my arousal and kinkometer would be sky high with these delicious elements, However, the writing style was a little simplistic for me, I also like a more noncon or dubcon feel between characters, but I didn't rate it down because of my personal likes.
What tends to happen for me when there are dom/sub scenarios that don't have the element of true dominance, too much agreement happens between characters and you lose that feeling of a total power exchange.
For example, our heroine is asked if she will become his kitten, her collar is not locked on her neck, her cage has a release button, she has a safe word, she can walk out of the arrangement and so forth.
All of these things work in the context of this story, but again I like my doms to scare me when I read about them.
I like the feeling that a dom is so dom that he will jump out of the book and spank my behind! That clearly does not happen here with a nice dom who asks permission.
So, I think this book is perfect for an audience that loves books with agreed upon limits, safe words and loving care for the sub.
I know my review makes me sound like an uncaring bitch, but I am trying to be real, The book is good and don't let my need for a bigger than life dom scare you away from reading this book.
It is sweet and will have just the right amount of spanking fun and romance for most readers, Enjoy. At the beginning I was frustrated by the premise of the story, Why would a judge turn a law breaking girl over to an attorney and wouldn't the attorney be afraid of having abuse charges filed against him I was further frustrated that she was mouthy and didn't seem to get the lessons.
I thought we could get to this point domestic discipline and control but it needed a different set up, Then we jump to sex and kitten play without much of a transition, Furthermore, the book could have used a good editor to clean up typos and errors, So I really can't express my feelings for this book and nothing I say will be able to compare to the awesomeness that is Finding Submission.
Ms. Michaels did an amazing job of showing a young girl just like the rest of us, . . and turning her into something so beautiful that you have to see it to believe it, Avery loves trouble but doesn't like the punishments that come after, . . and Preston has no choice but to really enforce the rules, Avery is entrusted in his care and he molds her into something no one saw coming, A beautiful soft spoken submissive who loves to be his good girl,
There are a lot of punishments given and a lot of tears but also so much love and affection.
Preston always looks after his good girl and the after care is perfect, This isn't quite a BDSM story it's an erotic journey taken by one young girl and the help of an unlikely source.
Highly recommended.
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