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have no idea what's going on here,

Ummm I don't even know what to say, So many dead end plots, Main parts of the book were never explained, The idea of an ice cold vamp and turning him hot again was genius, but the other stuff It made no sense.
Ugh Entertaining read by not spectacular, Could have used more development, Wish it could involve other characters story, like axi and brax, to know their story continued, Otherwise it was okayYou know I REALLY HATE that I have to review this book at a, There is such promise in the plot and storyline, But the writer was very stilted and the scenes were very sketchy, I give reviews like this because I am not trying to be a book basher, I just see such promise in this story but it falls flat, IF, and yes IF the author writes another story continuing this group, I will read it, No matter what I ALWAYS FINISH the book,

The question I ask isCan the author write a sequel and it be better written and edited Im going to follow and see.
I do look forward to future writings,. The premise was very interesting, The story would have benefited to have been tidied up but in general I look forward to another installment, Zyn and Anna. Anna is a Tellurian, which I guess is futuristic speak for human, Zyn is a half breed alien who was raised by a controlling crazy person, Zyn and his mercenary crew find her while rescuing an abhorrent princess for the reward, He keeps the fact that Anna survived a secret to help her escape, All would have been fine if it weren't for the princess's shoes!!!
Sounds weird I know, But the book had loads of good material and I hate to say it really could have been a bit longer.
I guess I will have to wait for the sequel and hope that Zyn and Anna are in it,
I really liked that the characters were not 'black and white'/'good and bad', A couple of the characters lose their badassness along the way and that was disappointing but didn't ruin it for me.
I downloaded this through the kindle lending library, and I'm glad I did, I wouldn't have wanted to pay for this, The blurb sounded interesting, like a scifi version of a vampire but the execution was severely lacking, I didn't like the heroine at all, I couldn't even connect with the hero, It wasn't for me. Unique

,Stars

Alien Warrior's Captive Earthling by Kat Emm, needs some work but it does have fun world building, which she can expanded.
First the title really Yikes! No imagination, as it more a synopsis than a book title, Second the story is unique, I will give the author points for originality, Alien Deadly Shoes! But what makes the shoes so lethal is never explained, Third the books sentence structure and language usage was written as if English may not have been the authors first language, as there are glaring omissions that English language people use, and other dialects omit.
Yes, English is a wordy complex mess of a language, Fourth the book needs edited because of this as words are omitted and grammar is misused, When I say edited I don't mean just proof read, actually edited for content and structure, Whereas proof reading is just for grammar mistakes and far too many authors rely on spell and grammar check, and don't actual hirer a qualified proof reader, that actually reads their books.


The book despite the problems is getting two and half from me because of the world building and characters that inhabit the world that Emm has created.
Emm has left lots of room so that she can flesh out her universe, At the moment it is a feudal one with a rebel faction, rescuing innocents out of slavery, Two and a half does not make a bad book, it is a book with problems that can be fixed.
The author had built a fun science fiction world, so author Emm, 'don't throw the baby out with the bath water', hirer good people to support your art and I will read more books written by you.


The secondary characters were fun and I see an Axi and Brax book in the authors future, Zyn is

a "Viper" vampire basically, and a mercenary, He rescues Anna from an alien vessel after she is tortured,

Anna is an indentured servant to a wicked Duchess, Wanting nothing more than freedom, These two have been through so much in the past, can they find a place to be together

When these two come together there is a scorching fire of epic proportions.
The chemistry is hot enough to fog up, and incinerate your ereader! The sexy scenes are mouth watering, The characters are fully formed and the storyline is action packed, Some of the secondary characters are an absolute delight and will have you laughing out loud, This is a scifi thrill ride, Intrigue, cleverly hidden weapons, different alien species, political spies, bad guys who are not so bad, there is plenty here to keep you on the edge of your seat.
Going through the emotions and experiences with the characters was an absolute thrill, The author has the talent to draw a reader into the story seamlessly and absolutely snare them hooklineandsinker! Fantastic read, I loved it!


Received an ARC copy for an honest review.
Dnfd pretty quick. Lots of spelling errors and grammar problems, Some fun ideas though. Really cool alien story,

This is a good read, Had to read in one sitting did not want to put it down, You have alien shoes that can kill, hybrid viper who shows no emotions and a human indentured women who has been thru hell and back.
Throw in a few more aliens and hold on for an adventure, Recommend to all paranormal readers, I give this a The cover is awesome, I know this is going to be a SciFi,
I have to say that I really liked the story, The characters are very interesting, And it had a good pace, The only thing that would of made it better and less disjointed and pull me in, would of been if somethings were expanded on, like the mystery behind the shoes, the conflict going on, Zyn background it took me half way threw to figure out that he was half vampire and half I don't know whatand a bit more on Anna I didn't even realize she was a human.

I Liked the secondary characters and like to see what happens with them, The ending I didn't care to much for,
But I enjoyed this enough that I will Read the next book when comes out, Just too slow paced and boring, I couldn't finish it.
DNF atgreat read!

I thought therefore was fantastic from beginning to end, great characters, awesome story line, a must read! I can't wait for the next one! Didn't Hate it,but I sure as Hell didn't enjoy it

A good book/story to me is a fun fast flowing ride that you never want to end,this Was a long slow dry uphill slog and I was relieved when it was over.
Zyn and Anna were ok but honestly I wasn't crazy about either, Anna was just kinda "there " to me she was ok, but just had enough personality and development to say she was there and Zyn ,well he played the I think I'm noble saving the h from big bad me,cold alone aloof BS for Sooo long by the time he started to begin to allow himself to thaw and maybe start to enjoy Anna at leastthru the book, I not longer cared in the slightest.
We never totally understood the plot that brought Zyn and Anna together in thest place and I honestly like Axi and Brax more even if they were barely in the book.
Though I'm sure that's not why,but in seemingly barely in the storyseconds it seems they were both more funny and more interesting than both the main characters combined.

And that last bit at the end with Vane was complete and utter BS!!!!! Totally useless and didn't add to or enhance the story in ANYWAY!
I'm off to delete rather ticked off the refund period is onlydays.
. . We deserve at least a month
Ps, Not sure why I gaveand not theit deserved, . . Not sure why but despite how I feeljust felt spiteful thou that what it has in my heart, . . Neat idea ruined by odd writing, I had to reread several sentences in the first few pages and some still didn't make sense, This doesn't read like a final draft,

The plot is sporadic and nonsensical, The dialogue is cheesy. The chemistry is good. No world building.

Mature content I loved everything in this book,
Now I'm excited to read the second one, overcoming alien biology, love blooms, a tale of lust, cruelty, violence and love, It could have been awesome, I love these type of stories, but the writing, . . good lord .
It was confusing, contradictory and just plain annoying, Outstanding Book!!

I thoroughly enjoyed this book, Extremely well written story. Well developed, vivid, and relatable characters, I was engaged immediately to the plot and the story pulled me in so quickly that I couldn't set it down until I found out what happened in the end!! This is a great addition to anyone's elibrary!!!!!! Well, it fell apart a bit at the end, but good! Kind of shallow, but still interesting! Really liked the characters, but there was Logic Fail tm.
Want Axi and Brax book pls thnx, .