Exceptional storytelling
I appreciate the earnestness with which the author approaches the subject and the thoughtful treatment of the characters, A great beginning to an exciting tale,
anticipating next episode More plagiarism: this is a direct ripoff of 'Shown The Way' by Valerie Hope, still freely available on Fictionmania where it's posted as a complete story, not spilt into two parts as it is on Amazon to milk even more money from unsuspecting purchasers.
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