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review is a bit confusing like my view of this book so bear with me, . .

If I could give,I would, the story of Kainan is good it flows nicely and it never stalls, I think it is a good book and I want to stress that, I don't think it is as strong as other fiction I have read and as a big fan of Terry Goodkind I will rate all other fantasy against his books and thats where this book falls down for me.
It lacks depth . What I mean is there is one story and yes its a good story but that's it theres not enough invested in the character for me I want to care for the character and feel for them, to cheer for them when they eventually complete their quest and save the day.
In kainan I was never shocked never surprised it was pretty obvious who was bad and who was good from the start and I still feel that Kainan calling Arweyn Honey was a mistake, is it a nickname How can someone who was unsure if the girl liked him and worries his feelings won't be reciprocated continue be a joker and call her honey Honey is used as a term of endearment I just don't think a man would call a female love interest Honey after one day of knowing her kindred souls or not.


Conclusion, worth a read but didn't rock my reading world, I will give it a few weeks and then think about reading the next one.
Very well written thank you Rosemary, If you liked Eragon you will definitely like this one, I immediately orderedas I have to know more, The Characters and the story are great! Thank you, In one night Kainan's life is destroyed everyone and everything he has ever known gone, Tricked into stealing the magical Ardor Crystal, the life force of the world of Malgar he is then left to die by the evil Gorzars.
Rescued by a young groundling female Kainan must now seek out the truth about his heritage and who he really is.


Embarking on an epic journey they find themselves torn apart by murder, lies and treachery as they battle against mythical creatures, discover magic, power, friendship and love in their epic quest to return the Ardor Crystal to the world of Malgar, and stop the return of the Gorzar Empire.


Time is running out, . . This author certainly knows how to pack a punch and write a good plot, Great loveable characters. Great baddies. Bit of romance. Great fighting scenes. Lots of adventure. However, I was a little disappointed with the editing, It really needs a good and thorough looking at, Spellings are fine, it's just the grammar, Words are missing or doubled up as a sentence has been changed and the author has forgotten to take something out.
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didn't put me off though as I got quite used to it, I might just have stretched this tale to a, if hadn't been for the bad editing, Hi im Rose, author of epic fantasy / romance / erotica, I started writing a couple of years ago and released my first book Kainan Deragan Sword Prophecy Book One this year.
It has now gone through a re edit and has been re released as The City of MalgarI have been married to Paul foryears and we have three lovely children, Charlotte, Melissa and Jake.
I love animals and we have a border collie called Arweyn named after my heroine!, And a cat called Maggie, Hi i'm Rose, author of epic fantasy / romance / erotica, I started writing a couple of years ago and released my first book 'Kainan' Deragan Sword Prophecy Book One this year.
It has now gone through a re edit and has been re released as The City of MalgarI have been married to Paul foryears and we have three lovely children, Charlotte, Melissa and Jake.
I love animals and we have a border collie called Arweyn named after my heroine!, And a cat called Maggie, sitelink.