Get Blinded: Part One (Blinded, #1) Author Sarah Masters Formatted As Paperback

was a good story about a young man with an overbearing mother, He acts like such a coward but I guess the years of physical and emotional abuse have worn him down, He and his best friend are in love with each other, but when he finally leaves home, he runs away without his friend.

I am eager to find out more,
One spelling error: fair for fare, Lee still lives at home with his domineering mother, who makes it quite clear she's antigay

Since Lee's father left the marital home, Lee's mother has punished him physically and mentally, ensuring he keeps his love for Ryan secret.
One night, when Lee's mother goes out, the two young men explore one another in Lee's room,

After an explosive revelation, Lee leaves home, the need to sift through his past and come to terms with who he is paramount.
Someone makes it clear Lee must never come back to town, frightening Lee into agreement, The only problem is, he'll be leaving Ryan behind I'll keep this short,
I hate to be nasty when it was a free story, but, . . I have no desire to continue with this serial,
My first complaint is: the overabundance of cussing, I guess this is a thing with me, but I find it a cheap lazy excuse to feed emotions into the scene,

"Why are you fucking leaving me here with her, Dad Fucking mad woman, Shitting, fucking, bastard man woman, "

So, here's the thing, . . this is a powerful scene, I would have 'felt' more if fuck wasn't already usedtimes in the few pages before this,
This does nothing but annoy me, I don't cuss a lot, it doesn't bother me when people do, but it bothers me when it's liberally thrown into stories, I think there is a time and place, . . fuck is often abused in writing, and it was littered through these few pages,
I felt nothing with the above scene, . . and I should have.
And then there's the abusive mother, Child abuse is pure evil. I did not care for

how it was spun into the story, Again, this is a 'me' problem,
Finally, the GFY best friend scene was, a hot mess.
I'll leave it at that,
I gave it a go, . . it was definitely a NO, . . and now I'm moving on,
I suggest you do too,

nonono Sarah Masters is one of three pen names I write under, Sarah mainly writes m/m, Natalie Dae writes het erotica, while the third, Charley Oweson, writes thriller/horror/suspense books with no sex, sitelink www. emmyellis. comI enjoy writing all genres, though I havent attempted, nor plan to attempt Sci Fi, sitelink sitelink sitelink sitelink sitelink Sarah Masters is one of three pen names I write under, Sarah mainly writes m/m, Natalie Dae writes het erotica, while the third, Charley Oweson, writes thriller/horror/suspense books with no sex, sitelink www. emmyellis. comI enjoy writing all genres, though I haven't attempted, nor plan to attempt Sci Fi, sitelink sitelink sitelink sitelink sitelink sitelink,