Gain Brothers With Benefits Penned By William Cooper Print

The problem with this story isnt the twincestafter all, I knew that coming inbut the speed with which everything transpires,

Josh has a huge crush on his twin, unfulfilled, probably not helped by Erick constantly prancing around shirtless, Then one night a video chats brings the twin brothers together for a mutual jerkoffwhich turns into a live jerkoff when Josh realizes who hes chatting with and takes a risk.
After that, once the initial afterawkwardness is dealt with, the two men decide to start a relationship, including coming out as gay lovers.


The story is given in first person, from Joshs point of view alone, The pace is really quick, and somewhat implausible, These twins are in their twenties, but all his life Josh has believed Erick to be straight, In this story, Erick has sex with women, And yet he has also unbeknownst wanted Josh all this time, I find it a bit hard to believe that they could have passed their horny teenage years without giving their desires for the other away.
In any case, Erick is apparently bisexual, His point of view, as he makes a huge life change, would have been very welcomed here, Now, his side isnt given and we cant emotionally connect with the character as he basically uproots his whole way of life,

This storys about more than sex too, Theres an unnecessary women stalker subplot and also a coming out aspect which was a lot more interesting, I just wish the first had been dropped entirely and the second given more depth, In fact, the story overall needs more depth instead of melodrama,

The writings good and efficient, so theres nothing wrong in that regard, I find myself wishing Mr, Cooper would write a longer, more indepth piece, As is, this novella has too much happening for such a short story, Nonetheless, for a twincest romanceand this is more a romance of forever kind of love than pure eroticathis ones okay, above average, I think this story had a lot of potentialinteresting concepts like taking an incestous relationship public and some hot themes exhibitionism/voyeurism, but in the end it felt a little thin to me.
The main characters, the obstacle they overcame, and even the world itself, felt like it was made out of paper, There was also a lack of attention to detail that I didn't like Jason gets woken up by his older brother, everyone talks of a bit, they make breakfast, they talk for an hour, Jason spends an hour at the police stationand he still makes it to work on time.
choice This is either a subject most readers love or hate, I love it!

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sitelink prismbookalliance. com/ Boring. Absolutely boring. It wasn't the plot the writing was meh, I just didn't care and truly had to make myself finish apage book, Josh is secretly in love with Erick, How could he not be Erick is sweet, funny, smart, and as wonderful as he is handsome, He's simply everything Josh could ever want in a man, Plus, there's no one in the world that knows or understands him better, After all, Josh and Erick have been friends and companions for as long as either can remember,


But Josh is sure that he'll never find the right opportunity to share his feelings with Erick,


However, everything changes when Josh creates a profile on the popular online social network, Visive Encounters, a video chat website that randomly arranges facetoface meetings with strangers via webcam.
One night, in a collision of fate and software algorithms, Josh is more than surprised when his monitor reflects a mirror image, . . his random connection is none other than the object of his desire, his twin brother Erick,


With only a screen of pixels separating them, will Josh finally be able to confess his morethanbrotherly feelings to his twin Will a lifetime of memories be enough to hold the brothers together


Brothers with Benefits is a,word novella featuring incest between brothers.
bangs head on desk looks at computer screen bangs head on desk again, . . flails how does someone write PWP and forgets to add the porn,but I rounded up, I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review, I enjoyed the story of Josh and Erick, A week ago I might have questioned the whole theme of the book, It is so taboo. Male/male romances in general are not main stream, but when you add the factor that it's two brothers, twin brothers, it's quite shocking.
But then I read Two Point Conversion the other day and realized that the idea didn't bother me the way I thought it would.
I didn't quite feel the connection between the characters that I would have liked, but it might be because the story is fairly short.
I think more could have been explored, I liked the twist in the end with a crazy ex girlfriend who was determined to keep them apart but again it was sort of rushed.
In the end I liked this book, an I don't think it will be my last brotherly love tale I read,.stars

Hot story about the love between two brothers, but I felt like the 'incest' aspect of their relationship was too easily accepted by the people around them to make the story completely credible.
I highly enjoyed the story! It was my the few gay erotica stories I'd read certainly the first brotherincest book, I enjoyed the subgenre much more than I thought I would, Absolutely a nobaggage arrangement between the bro's, It made me want to jump

into a brother sandwich,

Yes, the cover is fabulous, and you will lose many days staring at it, . . but read the story on its own merits, I liked it and it's a great intro to

Disclaimer: I betaread an early draft of this ebook and gave feedback on it, That cover promises so much,

This is the cleanest erotica I've every read, Pretty much BJ's and jerk offs it is Twincest and they go off page for a fuck Excuse me, I like my smutty goodness with raunchy behaviour.
Really! It is like the Mary Sue of erotica,

You go out on a date with your twin, That is not going to go well, But the person sending pictures around, Just what No.

It was all too, . silly and sweet.


Well, . . that will teach me to buy a book high on cover lust!!!!

Identical twins Josh and Erick live together and have both loved each other since seventh grade, yet neither had acted upon it in fear of the others reaction! Erick has a bunny boiling girlfriend now ex, serious apparently, that Josh had no inkling about.
. . please!!! Then the plot just becomes ridiculous, the characters, . well, they were just insipid! and the sex, . . all I can say is there are only so many ways to explain blow jobs and mutual jerking off sessions!

Sorry, this just wasn't for me and gets one star for the cover.
. . which I love!!! This wasn't a bad story my main complaint is that there wasn't enough of it, Reading incest stories doesn't bother me, I grew up reading VC Andrews, but if you're going to write an incest story, I do want more on the "how" of it, the psychological factors that led these two brothers to be attracted to each other, because there are biological and psychological reasons that we don't fuck our siblings.


This was a little unsatisfying to me, because the conflicts facing Josh and Erick are mainly external ones there's little to no internal conflict at all.
It feels unrealistic and it's something I very much WANT from an incest story, This is more what I call a "happy incest story", where there's no real guilt or psychological or even serious social repercussions from two family members having a romantic and sexual relationship.


The writing is good, however, It mainly just needs fleshing out and for the author to take more time with it, not rush through it, .