Access Moving On (Ghost Of The Past, #1) Fabricated By Trisha Grace Formatted As Audio Books

you read further, please note that I was contacted by the author and asked if I would read the book and post an "honest" review.
I have written to the author and suggested some things that I hope will make future work even better.
Here is my review:

Moving On is a good work by a new, young author who is striving to Move On herself in her skills and creative writing world.
The book could use a good editor

to take care of some grammar issues and also some wrong wording that can easily be corrected.
That is always something that a new indy author has trouble finding, a good editor,

The story is part Romeo and Juliet and part Pride and Prejudice, I can see parts of each story within Moving On, Kate Mitchell is a young woman who becomes associated with a Grandfatherly man who has volunteered at the Nursing Home unit where her grandmother is.
This man provides loving care for her grandmother and then befriends her as well,

Their relationship becomes one of a grandfather/granddaughter even though they aren't blood relatives I can relate personally as I have several relationships like this.
When Grandfather Hayes dies he asks Kate to do something for him, he asks her to do her best to help his grandson from whom he is estranged.
Kate promises. This leads to the most unusual year of her life,

Grandfather Hayes wants Kate and his grandson, Tyler Hayes, to live in the same "Family Home" for the next year.
They will have two chaperon's, the older caring Marianne who has taken care of Tyler as well as Mr.
Sawyer the elderly lawyer of the family,

The story brings a disgruntled, angry, bitter young many home to face some issues, It brings a young Christian woman who loves life and cared deeply for Grandfather Hayes to a place where she is going to have to face some of her past issues as well.


Both young people lost their parents in ghastly ways at early ages, They have to face those demons and deal with them, They also have to face the reality of learning to care and trust each other,

The story is a bit simple, The plot is predictable. The dialogue somewhat simplistic. There are many things I might have developed differently, such as their wealth, their friends, Kate's Christian walk.
etc.

But all in all this was a fun read, I must admit that I have twenty other books I am suppose to read and review, I told Trisha Grace I would read three chapters and give her some thoughts, Instead I got hooked and read the whole thing,

Simple, YES, Predictable, YES, Enjoyable, YES!

Why only four Because she needs an editor.
She needs some development in her writing, If I give her four she has nothing to work towards,

Thank you Trisha for asking me to read,
Absolutely amazing love story full of adventure and mystery, I love the characters and their story line is beautiful and interesting, The way they bring the story to life is phenomenal and makes you feel part of the journey.
I absolutely enjoyed reading this beautiful story and I highly recommend it, Excellent writing and definitely a book to enjoy, Congratulations! I look forward to reading Dan and Evelyns story, SENSUALITY RATING: No profanity No Euphemistic "code words No sexual encounters

GENRE: Inspirational Romance slight touch of the Supernatural

SETTING: A mansion somewhere in the USA

CENTRAL FEMALE CHARACTER: KATE MITCHELL Owner of a successful interior designer company caring and sensitive to the needs of others.


CENTRAL MALE CHARACTER: TYLER HAYES Owner of a successful security systems company not sociable just lives in his own world.


SYNOPSIS: They have both lost their parents and now she has lost a good friend.
He was abandoned by his grandfather and as a result he does not connect with other people.
They meet at a funeral,

WHAT I LIKED: Tylers friends crack me up, Also, a song being played on the piano a couple dancing in the moonlight a rescue,

WHAT I DID NOT LIKE: Tylers overprotectiveness is written OVER THE TOP Joannes obsession is written OVER THE TOP Kate being protected by everyone is written OVER THE TOP.


OVERALL RATING:because fantastic plot but some things written over the top, Absolutely I will read book two,

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I loved this book, I have never heard of sharing a home with someone for a year per request of a loved ones will, but loved the idea of it in this book.
The story line is wonderful and the characters are fun amp witty, Well, with the exception of Joanne, as I just didn't seem to like her at all, I found her to be a clingy whiny ex girlfriend, One you just want to slap and tell her to shut the heck up and move on with her life already, lol.

The bond between Tyler and Kate is electrifying, I was so happy for them when they finally became one,
The story has leads to other avenues or other goings on between characters which leads you to wanting to read more.
I would definitely recommend this book to anyone, Tyler felt he was abandoned by his grandfather after his parents death, Twenty years later he ordered to his funeral and the reading of his will, Hoping to receive the place he grew up hes disappointed to find his been bequeathed to a woman he doesnt know.


Kate is stunned as she sits and listens to the reading of Mr, Hayes will. Now in order to right things she has to agree to the stipulations of the will,

This is a thought provoking book with many ahah momenets, Love it.
REVIEW

Tyler Hayes had been taken away from a home that had been his since childhood.
Over twenty years ago. When his parents died from a terrible accident, Tyler's grandfather sent him away from the mansion,

Twenty years later, Tyler's grandfather died and Tyler could finally go back home, But once again, Tyler was betrayed by his family, Death didn't even stop the cruelty of the grandfather, Tyler wasn't the heir to the mansion, A mysterious woman was. Kate Mitchell. She didn't know Tyler, but she did know of the changes in the Haye's family,

Here we have two generations that have long been apart from each other, Will Kate bring them back together Different people with different ideas, personalities and solutions to the problems.
Will they learn to try to get along or will the feud continue

The author wrote a good book that shows the past can be overcome and you can move on.
The author wrote the characters with such colorful descriptions that helped to make the story flow well.
This was a lay it all out on the table book, The author held nothing back,

The author put a fair amount of suspense in the novel which kept the reader turning the pages to find out what will happen next.
A well written, suspenseful, page turner, The author put in one huge lesson, You can let go of the past and move on.
You can reunite afteryears, It all depends on the person and how much he or she wants to make amends and move on.


I was given a complimentary copy of MOVING ON from the author, Trisha Grace for my view of the book.
No other compensation took place,

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