K.A. Merikan
This is what I get for being curious, You get fucked up creatures doing fucked up things to other creatures while you don't understand what is going on at all, All I know is I don't know what the fuck I just read,
The genital slit thing, . .
How does that work, man Is it just a weird random penis sticking out of the tail And where is it Is it vaguely in the area of where his crotch would be if he had legs
Anyways, mermaids always bring up interesting physiological issues.
I mean, they have to be mammals
because their tails are usually portrayed as going up and down as opposed to side to side as fish and sharks do there might be a term for it but I'm drawing on vague memories from Biology waaaay long ago, so I don't remember it
However, how, then do they stay underwater They don't surface to breathe, so they must have gills.
But then if they are humanlike, how can they be warmblooded and survive
Because fucking black magic, Shrug. That's always the answer, right Black magic, lol,
Eh, but that's part of their draw the contradiction, Cold and warm. Fish and human.
Actually, this one's mermaids brings up further issues,
Really A humanlike penis
And yeah, this is definitely more a teaser than anything,
Onlystar because it seemed incomplete,
And I really need to rethink my favorites shelf because I've just been using it for books I rather liked, . . Weird just, weird : Just days ago, Llawan was taken from his underwater dwellings by Ossentharian slavers, Left in a tank with other merpeople, he awaits his death on a spit roast, but the arrival of an unusual customer might change his fate.
To win his freedom back, he must enter a pact with the stranger, but what if the price is too much to bear
POSSIBLE SPOILERS:
Themes: merman, slave, captivity, dehumanization of merpeople, dark magic
Genre: high fantasy
Erotic content: explicit, dubious consent
Length:words Very entertaining and imaginative.
I'd like to read more in this world, esp about Rys, He's mysterious. Fascinating, a bit disturbing. I wish this was much longer, I would love to learn a whole lot more about the world created and its inhabitants, Short stories should be either stand alone, or offshoots from a longer novel/series,
This is neither.
It's very well written, set in what hints to be an utterly fascinating world, and has characters the reader will immediately fall in love with.
And then it just stops.
I hope the authors will consider expanding this into a full novel sooner the better,
This is one of the most intriguing reads I've ever have the good fortune to chance upon,
At first in the beginning, it gave me constant goosebumps of this variety, . .
Then I was titillated with a unique kind of 'fingering' or 'fondling' of a Merman's slit.
It's like reading a vaginapenis stimulation combo that made me go,
Lastly, when it ends,
I felt somewhat unfulfilled, I NEED more. Please please give me moar! Mayday! Orgasm denial here!
sitelinkK, A. Merikan, please tell us you have more A continuation maybe :P I do have to say a big thank you to both of you for writing this masterpiece and putting it up at Smashwords for free too.
Yeah, I love it! ltIt was good, Weird but good. Don't miss it. Try it
Oh and I cast him as my Llawan
Credit: Artwork by Heise
Ummm, . . it was good
Hard to describe though,
Creepy.
Somewhat disturbing.
Refreshingly creative.
Imaginative.
Left me dying with anticipation,
Also Adriana's word: weird, This story is fucking weird, I liked it a whole bunch, Say WHAT!
Okay, . . that was one of the oddest things I've read and other than a desire to reconsider becoming a vegetarian I'm not sure I understand what the heck happened.
Bizarre. Wow. Incredible imaginations at work here, disturbing and boundless, My kinda party!
Huh,
Okay Well. First, I wanted to read this because: gay mermen, Nuff' said. Then I read the reviews and HAD to because of the reactions seriously, if you havent seen them yet go now and just try not being curious, I dare you.
And now I get it,
And Im questioning a lot, . . about myself.Because I liked it, And I just I dont know anymore.
/not a real review I cant logic I want more so I can understand more about Rhys and LLawan, I was kind of reticent in starting this, I mean, the first line was "When the mermaids skin turned a dark golden hue, the kitchen staff moved the spit roast away from the fire and placed her grotesquely contorted body on a metal stand at the main table.
" and I was already envisioning scary, torturous scenes where the main character barely escapes with his life, . . or not. The actual story wasn't that scary thank God,
But it was very original, Each character with a unique set of traits and physical elements, And I really could envision that Llawan was a merman with every tiny, seemingly insignificant detail added in the story, twitch of a fin, glide of the body through the water, breathing the air without the comfort of water.
The plot itself was a mix between seduction and horror and yet, just like Llawan, I found myself wanting to read more about the pair, discover what else is in store for them.
Recommended for original story and characters and interesting play on impressions, I don't know how to rate this story It was fun to read and it's a good story, Well written as well.
The story is nicely narrated from the young Llawan's perspective, but I was actually more interested in Rhys and would like to see "more of him".
I know it was titled "Playing with Food" and that was it, But I wanted to read more, It ended too quickly for me, Theare because it ended just as things were getting "intense",
That was weird yet strangely fascinating, I have no idea what to say except, I want to know what happens next!!
If you like mermen, vore, and stories that end pretty much as soon as they start, then THIS is the one for you my friend!
Very weird.
very short interesting in a sickly fascinating kind of way, If they ever decide to follow this up with some actual plot, I'll be front and center to see where it goes, WTF was that!
I'll admit my GR peeps peaked my curiosity and it's free so sign me up, But huh Was that some sort of mermaid rape I just read I mean on the scale of weird shit I've read, it was odd yet tame.
This was strange yet oddly hurtful, . . "The Little Mermaid" movie is my favorite Disney movie of all time, So, that dude just felt up Ariel's brother and ate his pinky, in my mind,
So I am going to go eat a cookie or something to ease the younger version of me that's a little disillusioned right now.
She can't believe the present me just read this shit,
The story is well written and not graphic at all, . . just weird. Um freak flag enthusiasts unite
Uhhhh,
I have no idea what I just read, . .
Did he just, . . and then wha huh
Or maybe he was just, . . no, he hmmmm
.
Um.
I'm not really sure what I read, but somehow, I think I actually, . . liked it oO
It's free, It's fish porn. And if you decide to try it, make sure you do it on an empty stomach,
Also, bonus points for answering this question that I never even knew had been floating around in my mind: Do mermen have peni and, if so, where
Stuck at the bottom of the huge aquarium, he watched the soulless land dwellers munch on the flesh of his brothers and sisters.
This is what I get for being curious, You get fucked up creatures doing fucked up things to other creatures while you don't understand what is going on at all, All I know is I don't know what the fuck I just read,
“I have a need for a resourceful fish boy, ”
The genital slit thing, . .
How does that work, man Is it just a weird random penis sticking out of the tail And where is it Is it vaguely in the area of where his crotch would be if he had legs
Anyways, mermaids always bring up interesting physiological issues.
I mean, they have to be mammals
because their tails are usually portrayed as going up and down as opposed to side to side as fish and sharks do there might be a term for it but I'm drawing on vague memories from Biology waaaay long ago, so I don't remember it
However, how, then do they stay underwater They don't surface to breathe, so they must have gills.
But then if they are humanlike, how can they be warmblooded and survive
Because fucking black magic, Shrug. That's always the answer, right Black magic, lol,
Eh, but that's part of their draw the contradiction, Cold and warm. Fish and human.
Actually, this one's mermaids brings up further issues,
Really A humanlike penis
And yeah, this is definitely more a teaser than anything,
Onlystar because it seemed incomplete,
And I really need to rethink my favorites shelf because I've just been using it for books I rather liked, . . Weird just, weird : Just days ago, Llawan was taken from his underwater dwellings by Ossentharian slavers, Left in a tank with other merpeople, he awaits his death on a spit roast, but the arrival of an unusual customer might change his fate.
To win his freedom back, he must enter a pact with the stranger, but what if the price is too much to bear
POSSIBLE SPOILERS:
Themes: merman, slave, captivity, dehumanization of merpeople, dark magic
Genre: high fantasy
Erotic content: explicit, dubious consent
Length:words Very entertaining and imaginative.
I'd like to read more in this world, esp about Rys, He's mysterious. Fascinating, a bit disturbing. I wish this was much longer, I would love to learn a whole lot more about the world created and its inhabitants, Short stories should be either stand alone, or offshoots from a longer novel/series,
This is neither.
It's very well written, set in what hints to be an utterly fascinating world, and has characters the reader will immediately fall in love with.
And then it just stops.
I hope the authors will consider expanding this into a full novel sooner the better,
This is one of the most intriguing reads I've ever have the good fortune to chance upon,
At first in the beginning, it gave me constant goosebumps of this variety, . .
"When the mermaids skin turned a dark golden hue, . "
"Llawan was carried through a wide corridor, with walls that turned out to be covered in skin when he looked close, There were even little hairs sticking out and Llawan could swear the wallpaper was covered in goose flesh, "
Then I was titillated with a unique kind of 'fingering' or 'fondling' of a Merman's slit.
It's like reading a vaginapenis stimulation combo that made me go,
Lastly, when it ends,
I felt somewhat unfulfilled, I NEED more. Please please give me moar! Mayday! Orgasm denial here!
sitelinkK, A. Merikan, please tell us you have more A continuation maybe :P I do have to say a big thank you to both of you for writing this masterpiece and putting it up at Smashwords for free too.
Yeah, I love it! ltIt was good, Weird but good. Don't miss it. Try it
Oh and I cast him as my Llawan
Credit: Artwork by Heise
Ummm, . . it was good
Hard to describe though,
Creepy.
Somewhat disturbing.
Refreshingly creative.
Imaginative.
Left me dying with anticipation,
Also Adriana's word: weird, This story is fucking weird, I liked it a whole bunch, Say WHAT!
Okay, . . that was one of the oddest things I've read and other than a desire to reconsider becoming a vegetarian I'm not sure I understand what the heck happened.
Bizarre. Wow. Incredible imaginations at work here, disturbing and boundless, My kinda party!
Huh,
Okay Well. First, I wanted to read this because: gay mermen, Nuff' said. Then I read the reviews and HAD to because of the reactions seriously, if you havent seen them yet go now and just try not being curious, I dare you.
And now I get it,
And Im questioning a lot, . . about myself.
/not a real review I cant logic I want more so I can understand more about Rhys and LLawan, I was kind of reticent in starting this, I mean, the first line was "When the mermaids skin turned a dark golden hue, the kitchen staff moved the spit roast away from the fire and placed her grotesquely contorted body on a metal stand at the main table.
" and I was already envisioning scary, torturous scenes where the main character barely escapes with his life, . . or not. The actual story wasn't that scary thank God,
But it was very original, Each character with a unique set of traits and physical elements, And I really could envision that Llawan was a merman with every tiny, seemingly insignificant detail added in the story, twitch of a fin, glide of the body through the water, breathing the air without the comfort of water.
The plot itself was a mix between seduction and horror and yet, just like Llawan, I found myself wanting to read more about the pair, discover what else is in store for them.
Recommended for original story and characters and interesting play on impressions, I don't know how to rate this story It was fun to read and it's a good story, Well written as well.
The story is nicely narrated from the young Llawan's perspective, but I was actually more interested in Rhys and would like to see "more of him".
I know it was titled "Playing with Food" and that was it, But I wanted to read more, It ended too quickly for me, Theare because it ended just as things were getting "intense",
That was weird yet strangely fascinating, I have no idea what to say except, I want to know what happens next!!
If you like mermen, vore, and stories that end pretty much as soon as they start, then THIS is the one for you my friend!
Very weird.
very short interesting in a sickly fascinating kind of way, If they ever decide to follow this up with some actual plot, I'll be front and center to see where it goes, WTF was that!
I'll admit my GR peeps peaked my curiosity and it's free so sign me up, But huh Was that some sort of mermaid rape I just read I mean on the scale of weird shit I've read, it was odd yet tame.
This was strange yet oddly hurtful, . . "The Little Mermaid" movie is my favorite Disney movie of all time, So, that dude just felt up Ariel's brother and ate his pinky, in my mind,
So I am going to go eat a cookie or something to ease the younger version of me that's a little disillusioned right now.
She can't believe the present me just read this shit,
The story is well written and not graphic at all, . . just weird. Um freak flag enthusiasts unite
Uhhhh,
I have no idea what I just read, . .
Did he just, . . and then wha huh
Or maybe he was just, . . no, he hmmmm
.